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PAIN ANGEL by Lin Robinson Music and lyrics by Lin Robinson
FADE IN: EXT.
CESAR CHAVEZ PARK - DAY
Once
the jewel of Barrio Lobo, the park now looks sad and deserted: playground
broken down, grass in retreat, the Mexican Pride murals covered in gang tags,
the sign barely legible. Houses fronting the park show no activity, bodegas
are boarded up. The place has the look of a ghost town.
NOVENA
ROSAS, who would be a very pretty young Chicana cop if she weren’t so muscular,
starched, and forbidding, stands by a curbside police car writing on a
clipboard.
She
takes down info from MAX FLETCHER, a clean-cut, athletic anglo in his early
thirties. He wears wide
"Elvis" glasses and is missing a joint on his left index finger.
ROSAS You realize that signing the complaint makes your name and
address public, Mr. Fletcher? FLETCHER No. Is that why nobody complained? Well, I like to do my duty. ROSAS What I’m saying is that anybody can access it, including the people
you’re complaining about. FLETCHER Well, that’s fair. If it
goes to court they’d know, right? We
have to clean up that park, and I guess it starts with me. He’s
affable and admirable. Rosas regards
him a minute, drumming her fingers on the clipboard.
ROSAS Let me put it this way.
The cholos you're reporting
are a pretty tough gang called La Neta.
They're the reason the park is what it is. FLETCHER That's pretty much what I thought. Rosas
gives Fletcher an exasperated look, glances meaningfully at the driver of the
squad car.
SERGEANT
CAMERON COLE, a rangy California beach jock pushing forty, slips out of the car
and walks over, sizing Fletcher up. He
extends his hand for a shake.
COLE Hi. Cameron Cole, Duty Sergeant. FLETCHER Max Fletcher. Nice to
meet you. COLE Did Officer Rosas inform you... ROSAS (Nodding) ...that they can find out who you are and where you are and come
mess you up. It’s what they do. FLETCHER Sounds illegal. (Pause, then a smile) I’m sure I’ll be all right, Officer Rosas. You can protect me,
right? ROSAS Okay then, let me put it this way. Why are you doing this? FLETCHER I rent rooms across the street.
That park is a disgrace. Girls
aren’t safe there, kids are buying drugs, children can’t play there. And it’s ruining property values. ROSAS Property prices aren’t our concern. We try to keep people from getting hurt or killed. See what I mean, Mr. Fletcher? COLE It’s brave of you to do this, but I’d like to talk you out of
it. FLETCHER I always do my duty.
I've got medals for it. COLE Sounds like I’m not going to talk you out of it. Fletcher
shakes his head, the aw-shucks demeanor slipping for the first time, revealing
steel below.
FLETCHER Well, if anything looks suspicious, I’ll call 911. Now
Cole gives him a long once-over, then shrugs.
ROSAS Barrio Lobo is pretty isolated.
Our precinct has one car and it's a long way to the next cops. So calling 911 won't always save you. COLE So don’t call 911, call us.
Cell phone. Officer Rosas? She
already has a business card in her hand and passes it to Fletcher. He examines it, pockets it, smiles at them.
FLETCHER Thanks. You make me feel better already. Rosas Just please be very careful Mr. Fletcher. These aren’t kids, they’re dangerous
criminals. FLETCHER I’ll keep a low profile. Thanks. He
heads across the street and into an older house.
ROSAS Pendejo metiche. COLE Come on Nova, he’s a concerned citizen. Brave one, too. ROSAS Easy to be brave when you’re too pendejo to get the message.
We’ll end up cleaning him up. COLE Well, we were hoping somebody would file about that park. Let’s baby-sit him a little. ROSAS If you say so. EXT.
CHAVEZ PARK HANDBALL COURTS- DAY
A
small group of tattooed La Neta "cholos" hang out, smoking and
playing languid handball. They include
two who'll show up later: SHYBOY, a slim, shifty-looking dropout, and HOODLUM,
a brash, stocky bully.
A
police cruiser pulls up beside two “lowrider” cars parked on the grass. The gangbangers ignore it.
Cole
gets out of the side of the patrol car closest to the cholos, Rosas slides out the other side and stands behind the
engine compartment, obviously combat-ready.
Cole
puts on his hat, grips a clipboard, walks over as the bangers pretend to have
just noticed him.
SHYBOY Trucha! It’s the migra,
ese! HOODLUM Hey, we don’t got green cards.
Cause we ain’t “green gos”. COLE So why park on the green belt?
Illegal parking, disturbing the peace, sales of narcotics and beer to
minors, littering. Did I forget anything? SHYBOY I think you did, Cole-slaw.
Like a witness? WASTED CHOLO Huachate,
homes. It’s an ambush. He brought Kevlar Tits Rosas with him. And she shoots to kill. Sure
enough, Rosas has moved in behind them, stands in a covering position, rock
solid and stone-faced.
ROSAS What you shoot will kill you anyway, bicho. COLE We have a signed complaint.
I’m issuing you summons to appear.
The summons names anybody with La Neta tattoo or car insignia. SHYBOY Somebody filed on us?
You sure? WASTED CHOLO Peeps in this ‘hood that stupid? Cole
starts to respond, but sees Rosas’ incredulous look across the street, where
Fletcher is standing on his front porch. He smiles and raises both thumbs to
the cops.
HOODLUM I might see somebody that stupid, ese. ROSAS I told you he was a pendejo. COLE When you’re right, you’re right. Let's keep a close eye on that idiot. EXT.
CESAR CHAVEZ PARK - NIGHT
The
park is deserted except for Fletcher, smoking a nightcap cigarette on a bench
under a tree.
A
police cruiser ghosts by, Rosas at the wheel.
Fletcher
stands, grinds out his butt, and heads across the street to his porch. As the cruiser rounds the corner, he blows a
kiss in the direction of Rosas and enters the house. A light goes on in a curtained bedroom.
INT.
LA NETA LOWRIDER - NIGHT
Four
shaved heads rise in a car parked down the block. These La Neta cholos are
bigger, older and meaner than the park dealers. Except for fourteen year-old CHUCHO, not yet jumped in and hot to
make bones. PAYASO, their seasoned leader, drives, KOLO sits shotgun, SNEEKY in
the back.
KOLO We just go in and do him, mano? PAYASO Chale, Kolo. There’s old people in that house, ese. With phones, you know. SNEEKY That's black Camaro back there is his. We could trip the alarm. PAYASO That fucking Rosas would be back with a radio and a bazooka. CHUCHO Let me go in, Payaso.
See if I can get him to come out. PAYASO No way, chavito. You’re here to hold guns if we need it. Nada
mas. CHUCHO You need guns? It’s one
guy. KOLO You never know. That’s
why you’ll be holding them. It could be
a trap, you ever think about that? CHUCHO I just want to help. PAYASO Then shut up. SNEEKY Mira! He’s coming out to play. Sure
enough, Fletcher is on the porch locking up.
He has put on a light jacket and heads out for a walk, striding
purposefully down the street away from the car.
KOLO Let’s play something educational, homies. EXT.
PROVERBIAL DARK ALLEY - NIGHT
Fletcher's
saunter down the alley to a ranchero bar is cut off by the lowrider, skulking
in without lights to deploy three education-minded gangbangers.
They
stride up to Fletcher immediately.
Behind them Chucho gets clear of the car and watches, hands under his
hoodie.
PAYASO You shouldn’t cross us, gabacho.
Especially not to the cops. FLETCHER You guys should be ashamed of yourselves. Can’t you set a better example to the kid? PAYASO I’m just telling you why this happened, asshole. He
motions to Sneeky and Kolo, who move to Fletcher’s flanks as the powerful
Payaso stalks in. Fletcher stands
relaxed with a slightly puzzled expression on his face.
The
henchmen jump to grab Fletcher’s arms, but he's gone. Stepping forward, he
almost lazily kicks Payaso’s kneecap out of position. The big man screams and goes down.
Fletcher
whirls, striking Kolo on the side of the throat and driving him down towards the
feet of the charging Sneeky, who stumbles forward. Fletcher kicks him in the face so hard he flips over backwards
and lies still.
Kolo
is up to his knees, not at all a good place to be. Fletcher spins 360, his foot
catching him on the neck, flattening him.
Payaso
fights through the pain of his ruined knee to regain his feet. He shambles towards Fletcher, all guts and
no hope. Fletcher applauds silently,
nodding his head, then takes a step towards ending it.
Chucho
appears from nowhere, sprinting into the fight.
CHUCHO Payaso! Cachalo! He
bolts past Fletcher, tossing a pistol to Payaso, who manages to catch it
without falling, racks the slide.
Fletcher’s
arm flashes out, catching Chucho’s forearm on the upswing and jerking him off
his feet.
He
pulls Chucho to him, does some footwork.
There is a loud snap as the kid’s arm breaks, a piercing scream.
He
fires Chucho into Payaso, knocking him down again, then steps to the screaming,
grunting sprawl of bodies. As Payaso
lifts his head to see what’s happening, it happens: Fletcher’s foot flattens
his nose, recoils, slams into his temple for a knockout.
Chucho
still howls in pain, so Fletcher grabs him by the nape, lifts his head to punch
him unconscious.
FLETCHER Only humane thing to do. He
stands still, listening, then grabs the legs of two cholos and drags them
towards the car.
EXT.
THE M 13 BAR - NIGht
The
ranchero bar's door is blocked. By a
crumpled lowrider car parked in it with four flat tires. The scene is lit by the familiar red and
blue strobes, Rosas looking into the trunk of the lowrider, holding a revolver
and a radio.
ROSAS (Speaks to radio) I have no idea, just telling you. Can you get me that aid unit? (Pause) I got three adult Hispanic males, severely injured, bleeding,
breathing. Hispanic juvenile male with
severely fractured right arm. (Pause) Because I can see the ends of the bones, okay? She
holsters the radio and revolver, stares into the trunk.
ROSAS What happened here, idiotas? INT.
HOSPITAL ROOM - DAY
Chucho
lies limp in one of four beds in a tacky room, his arm in traction and his face
a map of hurt and shame.
Standing
by the bed are POKER, the battle-scarred La Neta leader, and INDIO, Chucho’s
brother. Both men are obvious drive-by
warriors and as down with the ‘hood as it gets.
INDIO No, you stepped up good, carnalito. You got a gun to
Payaso, even though.. well look at you.
Purple heart, pues. CHUCHO I was nowhere, bro. He took me down like a little kid. He was something else. Barely moved, but
kicked shit, bro. Barbaro. POKER He took out Kolo and Payaso, too. Some tough matones. You’re in all the way,
kid. Not just Indio’s brother, you’re pura
Neta now. INDIO And my brother. You did good. POKER So what happened to the guns? Chucho I don’t know, Poker. I was... POKER I know, I know. Calmate. We got plenty more guns. INDIO And he’s going to find out about that. Pronto. COLE (O.S.) Sounds like something we should talk about. The
Netas look to the open door, which frames Cole and Rosas. Cole has a clipboard, Rosas a pile of comic
books.
poker I got nothing to say to you. ROSAS Let guns say it for you, right?
Get more kids shot up? Indio Look who's talking, Anita Oakley. COLE I get a bad feeling about this.
Let's go to the station, talk about it. POKER You arresting me'n'shit, Cabbage? Poker
and Indio are taking belligerant postures, the situation getting tense.
Rosas
breaks the tension by moving to the bed, laying the comics books beside Chucho,
smiling at him.
ROSAS How you doing, chivato? Chucho (Sullen) I'm okay. Rosas
turns to the older gangsters, determinedly calm.
ROSAS I think the more we talk, the better for the barrio, huh? Why don't we get together tomorrow? In Victor's office. He'll check your rights and stuff. We just don't want anymore people hurt. Poker
and Indio scowl and posture, but give stony nods.
COLE Meanwhile, could we talk to your brother a minute? While he's still alive. ROSAS No thanks to you two. Indio
and Poker exit. Cole gives Rosas the
eye.
COLE I could use some coffee.
How about a soda, Chucho? Rosas
nods, Chucho gives Cole a toughguy glare. Cole exits.
INT.
HOSPITAL SNACK BAR - day
Cole
waits for a cup to fill with coffee from a vending machine, holding a tray with
soda can and another coffee.
ALICIA (O.S.) So there are worse things than Starbucks, after all. Cole
turns to see ALICIA CHILDERS, attractive in her late thirties, wearing a
conservative business suit and holding a slim leather attache case. She poses for him slightly.
ALICIA Hi, Cam. Do you know
where they put Paez? Kid with a broken
arm? COLE Four eighteen. Just
talked to him. And his cholo-ass bros. ALICIA I'll go up and waste my time, too. COLE You sound better, look better.
ALICIA Than when, back when I was worse? COLE Been staying out of jail? ALICIA (Smiles wryly) Lately, yeah. So
see? That's an improvement, right
there. COLE And here we are, serving the same community. ALICIA Protect and serve isn't quite the same as "community
service". COLE I'd love to hear you explain the difference. Maybe over dinner, glass of wine. Chardonay, right? ALICIA I won’t say it wasn't fun being one of your women. Within my limitations. COLE When you were around, you were the whole show. ALICIA If you say so. But for
how long? cole Maybe we should find out? ALICIA Recycle projects never work out. COLE I don’t think of you like that. ALICIA I meant you. She
turns, does a femme fatale exit from the snack room. But she's smiling. Until
she almost bumps into Rosas, who was just outside the door and gives her a
highpower glare.
ROSAS You dump a great guy like him twice? What are you, stupid? ALICIA And just who the hell are you? ROSAS Novena Rosas, Cole's partner. I know about you. Some social
worker. You should get a clue. Alicia
draws herself up, gives Rosas a long look.
She glances at Cole, standing there nonplussed with his tray.
ALICIA You're right: I should.
I probably have been stupid. She
stalks off, heels clicking, as Rosas and Cole eye each other uneasily.
EXT.
BARRIO ALLEY - night
Alicia
is working late, walking absent-mindedly through an alley while stuffing a
manila folder into her case. She snaps
the case closed, produces a keychain and clicks it. Her car, an expensive BMW defaced by layers of gang graffiti,
chirps a welcome.
She
jumps, startled by the appearance of RIGO, late twenties Hispanic with
gangster-style clothes, no accent, and the look of ajock gone bad. He smiles reassuringly.
Rigo Do you know where's 746 Javalies? ALICIA The next street over.
Seven hundreds would be down that way. Rigo Thanks. But you know
what? I think you'll do. Nervous,
Alicia tries to pass him with wide berth, but he quickly sidles in front of
her.
Rigo You know, "do" as in "do it". Alicia
turns to run, but Rigo is on her before she gets turned, grabs her arm and uses
her motion to effortlessly twist it behind her, bringing her up on her toes.
Spinning,
he unwinds her against a fence. Stunned, she shrinks against it, but Rigo
pushes up to her, giving it some pelvic action. He grabs her blouse and tears it open.
Rigo Oh, yeah. These'll so
do. He
grabs and nuzzles as Alicia struggles feebly.
He runs her hand up under her skirt.
Rigo What else we got here?
Nice and damp for daddy? Alicia
yelps as he jerks his hand out from her skirt, holding ripped peach panties. He passes them under his nose, inhaling
theatrically.
Rigo Victoria's Secret. That demure, but somehow challenging,
bouquet. Alicia
remembers to scream, but before she can do it, Rigo pops the panties in her
mouth, covers them with his palm.
Rigo You can scream later, when it counts, honey. I'm not ready to take you public yet. He
turns her, pushes her towards a dumpster enclosure, Alicia moaning muffled
pleas through hand and underwear.
Rigo'
face is avid in the dim streetlight.
But a hand slams down out of the night, slapping him on the head and
clutching his hair. A hand missing the
tip of a finger.
Rigo
jerks backward, leaving Alicia disheveled, panicked, and spitting out
lingerie. Fletcher twists his head,
tossing him to the ground. Rigo rolls
to his knees, catches a kick in the stomach.
Alicia
runs to her car, clawing at the door, then her pockets. No keys.
Frantic, she turns to spot them on the pavement. Over where Fletcher is kicking the living
shit out of Rigo.
Her
back pressed against the car, Alicia watches transfixed as the fight continues
in the dim shadows. After absorbing
incredible punishment, Rigo decamps, limping down the alley leaning on fences.
Fletcher
turns, his shirt in tatters. He sees
her, retrieves her case, replaces the folders.
He scoops up her keys and walks over towards her, his face very
concerned.
Alicia
cringes back as Fletcher approaches.
FLETCHER Are you all right? Alicia
nods dumbly.
FLETCHER Are you sure? A woman
attacked like that is traumatized, and can overlook damage. Or go into shock. In
fact, she is a little unsteady on her feet.
Fletcher takes her elbow, but she snatches it away.
FLETCHER Sorry. I know you're afraid.
I didn't want you to fall over. He
reaches past her, unlocks the rear door of the BMW.
FLETCHER Can I suggest that you lay down awhile? Raise your knees? Button up, keep warm. Alicia
looks down at her exposed breasts, tugs her blouse together. Shakily, she sits
down on the back seat, feet on the street.
ALICIA Whoa, I am a little out of it, here. Thank you so much. You
were wonderful. I'm Alicia Childers. FLETCHER Max Fletcher. Look, lock
yourself in, lay down, lift your knees.
Here's your stuff. He
places the case and keys on the front seat.
FLETCHER But listen, you have to be more careful in this barrio,
okay? You're a good-looking woman, you
need to take precautions. He's
playing her tunes. She relaxes a
little, but the adrenaline is still working. She leans back on her hands.
FLETCHER Here. May I? ALICIA Well, I guess I can trust you to look after me. After all... Fletcher
smiles helps her scoot onto the seat.
She leans against the seat back, looking at him.
ALICIA A knight to the rescue.
Wow. FLETCHER Anything for a fair lady. ALICIA Come here a minute. You've got a thank you kiss coming. Fletcher
leans into the car and Alicia gives him a ladylike kiss. He remains in the
position, lowers to his knees on the rocker panel. She takes in his sexy musculature and handsome face. Recovering from her fear, she's impressed.
FLETCHER Would you feel better if I escorted you home? Alicia I think probably so. EXT.
FLETCHER'S HOUSE - night
Cole
edges the patrol car along the side street of the park, lights off. He studies Fletcher's house, where a light
is on in the front room. He sits,
mulling over.
The
car radio emits muted crackles. He
picks up the mike.
COLE Yo, Rosas. Working late? (Listens to crackle) Not really. Just a hunch drive-by. (Pause) You guessed it.
Something just smells wrong about that guy. The
radio crackles in reply, but Cole has lost interest. He sits, mike to his mouth, flabbergasted, as Alicia's BMW speeds
around the far corner and skids to a stop in front of Fletcher's house.
Fletcher
steps out of the car, laughing as Alicia tries to pull him back inside. He bends down to speak to her and she
lunges, throws an arm around his neck, gives him a sizzling, explicit kiss.
He
paws her perfunctorily, fights free and heads up the steps to his porch, where
he turns to wave to her.
Alicia
waves out the driver's window, blasts out.
Fletcher
keeps waving, but suddenly shifts the direction of his gaze, directly through
the trees to Cole in the squad car. He
laughs, enters the house.
Rosas
cracklepop on the radio is more urgent.
Cole breaks his stunned stare, keys down the mike.
COLE Over. Out. And like that. INT.
EL CENTRO DEL BARRIO - VICTOR'S OFFICE - DAY
VICTOR
MONCALDO, an elegant thirty-something Chicano in a suit sits under the law
degrees behind his desk, calmly presiding over a sitdown between Cole, who
leans forward aggressively in his chair, and Poker, who abides it with a
ticking-bomb aplomb.
VICTOR That question is out of line here, Sergeant. Mr. Cabrales came in to help you investigate
a matter of mutual concern. Not rat people out. COLE Yeah, you're right.
Look, Poker, let's just stick to who the hell this guy is and what he's
up to. POKER Ain't no ordinary vato, sabes? Some kind of ninja.
Somebody's fucking with us, trying to roll us up. COLE Roll up what? Who the
hell would want your shot-out turf? Offended,
Poker stands to leave, but drops a parting shot.
poker Eso, wey.
Who? He
exits. Cole looks at Victor and shrugs.
Victor returns the shrug, shakes hands with Cole, who exits. Victor looks very thoughtful, turns to his
computer and gets to work.
INT.
VICTOR'S OFFICE - DAY
Victor
sits facing his monitor; Alicia perches on his desk.
VICTOR The point is, they feel like they're under attack. ALICIA So they get a license to kill because they feel vulnerable? VICTOR You're sure changing your tone.
What happened to La Neta as community soldiers driven to organize by
evil black and white racist gangs and police states? ALICIA It's come to my attention that they are vicious little shits
dealing drugs to kids and seizing the park by threats of mayhem. VICTOR Really. I wish I could
grab your attention like that. She
shoots him a look, then relaxes.
ALICIA You come to my attention every time I blunder into reach of you. VICTOR Well, you have to admit you're pretty tempting. ALICIA So I've seen. Not my
favorite self-concept. But can we stray off your favorite topic for awhile? VICTOR If you insist, can I refuse you? You know Poker, head of La Neta? ALICIA Not to speak to. victor Something he said got me thinking. So I did a little research, asked some questions downtown. ALICIA You and Poker share interests? VICTOR Yes, he also finds you attractive. But what I'm talking about is just as hard to pin down. He
spins the monitor so she can see it, too.
ALICIA What is that, plats?
Zoning? VICTOR It's Barrio Lobo. The
area around the park. The blue shading
is properties that have been sold or optioned in the last two years. ALICIA Wow. Is there a
politically correct Chicano equivalent term for "white flight"? VICTOR There's a term I'm grasping for. See, you weren't around two years ago, but that's when La Neta
got out of hand. ALICIA Previously they confined themselves to helping old ladies cross
the street? VICTOR No, they were the illiterate savages you have decided they
are. But they weren't as numerous, as
belligerent, or as visible. He
taps the screen with his pen.
VICTOR About six months before all this realty activity they got
heavily armed, took over the whole border drug market, and staked out the park
as their private rumpus room. ALICIA And you make something of that. VICTOR That's what I'm grasping for. EXT.
BARRIO ALLEY - day
Fletcher,
nonchalant, strolls a Barrio backstreet.
Behind a fence Chucho, hampered by his full-arm cast, skulks along,
trailing him. He's chosen to bide his
time, but obviously has a major hatred worked up.
Fletcher
turns the corner, then steps back to survey the block. He looks around, smiles slightly.
Chucho
freezes to the fence until Fletcher walks on.
INT. VICTOR'S OFFICE - DAY Alicia
is in Victor's chair, staring at his monitor.
He leans against a case of legal books, eyeing her.
ALICIA You can't connect those titles and the gang activities. VICTOR Why would we? We just
oppose the take-over of the properties.
It's obviously a gentrification scheme. ALICIA Weren't you
telling me there's nothing wrong with gentrifying? It converts decay to productive, constructive occupancy? VICTOR You do
pay attention. I'm so flattered. But this isn't your normal gentry. Those homes were well kept, working class. ALICIA It's like
extortion. Stampede. VICTOR That was the
term I was grasping for. Thanks. It's fairly evil, actually. So, we oppose it. ALICIA Now that we can agree on.
Organize, mobilize, publicize. VICTOR All those commie techniques you picked up at Berkeley. And... a
little dose of realpolitick. ALICIA What's more real than grass roots actions for people's homes? VICTOR Backstage manipulations.
You're so quaint, Alicia. Look,
I talked with people I know downtown, some people in the party. ALICIA Uh, oh. VICTOR They're tossing together a quickie proposal to declare the park
and adjacent streets a historic area, cultural monument, whatever. ALICIA And every Hispanic politico will jump on it like a horny mutt. VICTOR Viva la smoke-filled rooms. ALICIA So you know people more powerful than real estate assholes? Wow. VICTOR Worst case, it'll delay motions and hearings. Maybe even mandate the dreaded
"studies". ALICIA Giving us time to look into this more. Mobilize the community. VICTOR And maybe by then things will escalate and get some media
attention. ALICIA Yes, let's all pray for a massacre. VICTOR Pestilence or famine would do, too. EXT. EL CENTRO DEL BARRIO
PARKING LOT - day
The exterior of El Centro
is a drab, defeated-looking storefront plastered with papers. Barrio locals mill on the sidewalk outside,
pass through the doors with kids and shopping bags.
Alicia edges through the
ragged clients and heads for her car.
She stops when she sees Cole standing on the other side of it, apparently
perusing its spraypaint scribbles.
She regards him with
neutral expression, one toe tapping.
COLE Hard to say
which is harder to read, the graffiti or your collection of bleeding heart
bumper stickers. And the rear end of the BMW
is definitely a maze of Tibet, Anti-Bush, and other leftie stickers.
ALICIA Better they
read my bumpers than gab on cell phones. COLE I
particularly noticed this one. He beckons her to the rear
of the car, points out a faded sticker reading: "I RECYCLE".
COLE Now who
should I believe, you or your bumper? ALICIA Oh I think I
am fairly believable. Cole turns to her, smiling
but earnest.
COLE You know, a
lot of guys would have taken your last comments to me as well, actually, a
brush-off. ALICIA A lot of guys
are perceptive. COLE But I know
you a little bit. And I sort of see you
looking around for something. In the
wrong places. When what you really want
is somebody you respect, who understands you.
Likes you, even. ALICIA And you're my
only hope for finding that, correct? COLE I just like
hanging out with you, talking about, you know, life in the jungle. Your bullshit leftie ideas. I miss you. Is
that so bad? ALICIA Did you use
to talk to me that way? COLE What I'm
getting at here... What is "use to" really worth? How's your future looking? She eyes him
searchingly. He stands up to her
scrutiny.
COLE Does it maybe
include a glass of chardonnay? A plate
of pahd thai? ALICIA My
future: the last frontier. INT. THAI RESTAURANT -
night
Alicia and Cole sit
together comfortably, dinner half-eaten, wine glasses almost empty. She has obviously warmed up to him, but
retains the skepticism of the once-burned.
ALICIA I'd just feel
like I'm... buying back a used car or something. COLE A creampuff,
though. ALICIA Original
guarantee voided. COLE But they just
plain don't make 'em like this anymore. ALICIA Not exactly
one owner, lots of hard miles. COLE But good
shape under the hood, below blue book. Frowning slightly, she
twitches his jacket open, takes in his sidearm and communicator.
ALICIA Radio and
heater, standard. As if to confirm her
reservations, Cole's cell phone goes off.
He smiles at her, cups the phone to his ear.
COLE This is
Cole. I'm a little busy right now...
Rosas? What the hell... When, right
now? Hey, I'm... Whoa! No, I'll be there. Alicia is listening to this
with jaundiced ear, and gives Cole a sour eye as he collapses the phone.
COLE I'm really
sorry. This is great. But I really have to move on this right now. ALICIA Well, don't
let me stop you. COLE (Oblivious) Thanks, babe.
I'll make it up. He moves quickly to the
register, swipes a credit card, hustles out the door.
Alicia leans back in her
chair, disgusted. A WAITER appears with a wine bottle, pours her a glass, which
she grabs.
waiter Will the
gentleman want a glass? ALICIA I don’t
really give a damn what he wants. Hold
on there, amigo. She deftly snatches the
bottle from him, waves him off.
ALICIA I'd suggest
you don't come between a bottle and a woman scorned. INT. DOWNTOWN JAIL - NIGHT
The blue-painted
interrogation room nicely sets off the blue jail coveralls of a small-time
weapons seller named CORSO, an aging, thickening non-entity. He is obviously ill at ease with his
surroundings.
SMITH, a coldly sleek
Federal Agent, is bad enough. But now there
are also Cole and some bellicose Chicana cop who looks like she's dying to get
him alone in the stairwell.
SMITH Oh, we've got
Mr. Corso about as cold as we ever get anybody. Sitting on a whole truck full
of guns so illegal we'll run out of hyphens to write them up with. COLE How many
years would you say, tote it all up? SMITH I'd say the
word is "terminal". Get this,
he even had a case of stamp-free hooch. Shame he didn't have any Cuban cigars,
we'd have had the ATF hat trick. COLE Wow, arms
retailer and bootlegger? Smith I'd guess the
booze was personal stash. You don't get
veins like that without working at it. COLE So he's
looking at a lot of time. But
ironically, very little time to do anything about it. SMITH Nicely
put. Soon as they get his booking
papers up here, it's a redeye to Denver. Look like a stimulating travel
companion? ROSAS He looks like
dead meat. COLE And we can't
even help him much. SMITH Well, every
bit helps when you are truly, totally, solidly fucked. corso Okay,
okay. You made your point. Whataya want
from me? And what good does it do me? Smith Co-operation
of any kind looks good to twelve peers. And parole boards, let's not forget. COLE And we aren't
looking for much. Not even names,
really. Just tell us about Men in Black
Camaros. ROSAS The more
you've got, the better we like you. At the moment, you suck. smith Oh right, the
Camaro. Meant nothing to me. Just buyers. I had the choice of following them or grabbing Bad Santa here
with his truck full o' death. The guys
here said you were looking for hotrods. Corso (Flat,
resigned tone) Flat black,
hood scoop, major hop-ups. Two males, thirties. One missing a finger, the other
missing a few cards from his deck. smith Thanks for
giving me information I already had just from surveiling. CORSO That's
it. You're all over the Camaro: that's
what I know. COLE Well, enjoy
Denver. CORSO Hang on,
dammit. Look, I don't know if this
means anything... ROSAS Let us decide
that, okay? corso Right. Back a
while I sold shitloads to this spic gang out in the boonies. Cole Barrio Lobo?
Shitload of guns? Corso That was
it. Lobo. Yeah, major military guns. And also some blow. Not my usual line of goods, see. COLE And this
interests me because...? Corso Beats
me. It was just a bizarro deal because
I was kind of referred to these assholes.
Got a guarantee to front them the dope.
Which I never saw, by the way, just brokered a delivery. Cole This was
about two years ago? corso About that.
But look at this. Last week those same
bangers were back. Looked over some heavy stuff I had, but couldn't afford
it. SMITH What
stuff? How heavy? Corso You should
know. The ones on your fucking
tapes. The AR's I sold to those Camaro
cowboys. SMITH He's talking
about current issue assault rifles with integral M-79 grenade launchers. The Tony Montana special everybody wants. COLE Oh, just
peachy fucking dandy. corso Hot item.
Can't keep 'em in stock. Those guys
will unload them quick at a big markup.
Maybe in Mexico. Rosas moves toward him, but
catches herself. She leans on the
table, staring at him, breathing heavily and obviously not adverse to tearing
him a couple of new ones. He quails.
CoRSO Jesus, is she
like, under control? COLE Most of the
time. But when she loses it, it's spectacular. One more question for you.
A biggie. Who referred you?
Guaranteed it? corso I really
don't know, not exactly, you understand. But the thing is, those Camaro cats
work for them. And the first time I
dealt with them, I had them tailed. COLE You're almost
there. Tailed where? CORSO Just some
bullshit office building. Probably a
rented front. Some sort of realty thing.
Assurance. Cole leans back, pries
Rosas' attention away from Corso.
COLE Does that add
up to anything at all for you? ROSAS Not really. INT. EL CENTRO DEL BARRIO
MEETING ROOM - night
The drab community room is
crammed with locals, all Hispanic, mostly women, some with babies, and older
men.
Alicia, in the same dress
as in the restaurant, shows the effects of more than one wine bottle. At a battered folding table, Victor has
their undivided, motions her up to speak.
VICTOR Favor de
escuchar su trabajadora social, la Maestra Alicia Childers. Alicia stands, slightly
unsteady, but maintaining. She and the
huddled masses eye each other warily.
ALICIA I know you
don't like me. Victor is shocked, by keeps
still.
ALICIA You think I
don't belong here. Well I don't like
working here. It's punishment, you
understand? The crowd looks at her
impassively.
ALICIA I don't like
you, either. I work hard for you
people. Who the hell are you to judge me?
Label me because I'm a different color?
Don't speak your damn language? Pugnaciously, she looks for
opposition, finds only placid faces.
She loses her chip a little, softens up.
ALICIA Look, I'm on
your side. I know how these things get
done. We can win this, but not by falling back on race and kinship and old
country bullshit. If you want your park back, fine. Let me help you organize to fight for it. Victor moves uncomfortably
in his chair, draws her glance.
ALICIA With Victor's
legal help. I don't like Victor, either.
I'm sick of him sniffing my pants.
But who I really, really don't like is cops. They can't help you get peace. I can.
Take me or leave me. She storms
out of a deep silence. EXT. EL CENTRO DEL BARRIO
PARKING LOT - NIGHT
Alicia sits in her
much-tagged Beemer, pulling on a bottle of Chardonay, fuming, listening to
ego-lacerating MUSIC on her CD player.
She starts to key the ignition, then stops, just sober enough to know
better than to drive drunk.
ALICIA No, no, no,
dearie. No drunk driving tickets. Let's save our leverage for vehicular
copicide. The doors of the Centro
open and the meeting files out. They
see Alicia in the car and stop, talking among themselves and pointing towards
her. Alicia waves her bottle at them, takes a swig.
ALICIA Yeah, what ya
gonna do with a drunken gringa, earlie in the morn? Feliz Navidad ya beaner sobersides. Two women leave the group
and move to Alicia's window. She hides
the bottle, looks at them with a drunken expectancy.
First sEÑoRA El
licenciado nos dijo su plan, Maestra. La apoyamos y lo agradecemos. Gracias por
su ayuda. SUBTITLE: Victor told us about your plan. We support you and appreciate your help. SECOnd
sEÑoRA Gracias,
Maestra. Llamame. SUBTITLE: Thanks, teacher.
Call me. The entire bunch files by,
mumuring thanks to Alicia. They leave
in small groups or in the back of old pickups.
Alicia stares after them,
stunned. She looks up to see Victor
standing by her car. She gives him a weak smile.
VICTOR Good thing
they don't speak much English. ALICIA And that I
can't speak Spanish. VIctor In a lesser
way. I told them what you planned, got
their phone numbers and contact points.
Alicia Thanks,
Victor. You've done great on this whole
thing. I'll do my best to pull off my
end. VICTOR Sorry you
think I do nothing but try to seduce you.
But I have to ask: will this put me in? ALICIA No way, Jose.
But you get respect. VICTOR I always
crave respect of people who drink wine in parking lots. EXT. BARRIO ROOFTOPS - DAY
Chucho continues to dog
Fletcher's tracks. He perches on a roof
above the park area, scoping out Fletcher's side windows with cheap plastic
binoculars.
Blurred by the crappy lens,
Fletcher moves around his kitchen.
Chucho lays his arms on the
roof crest, points an imaginary pistol, "fires", "recoils".
His eyes are like obsidian.
INT. EL CENTRO DEL BARRIO -
ALICIA'S OFFICE - DAY
Even shabbier than Victor's
law office, the social work section is grim, no personal mark on it. It's a cell.
Alicia sits at her plain,
battered desk, looking at Victor, who for once seems more interested in what
she's saying than how her chest moves when she says it.
VICTOR Cole told you
this? Alicia Yeah, not bad
considering I'm not talking to that dickhead. VICTOR But why? I mean why tell you? ALICIA I'd say he's
telling everybody. Hoping somebody adds
it up or tosses him the missing piece. VICTOR Why didn't
you? ALICIA What the hell
do I know? VICTOR Don't play
that. You're a sharpie. You put it together, didn't you? ALICIA Put together
what? Your theories, Cole's paranoia
about a guy I... Some BS from a scumbag trying to weasel out of federal time. VICTOR Well, just
theoretically then. Two years ago La
Neta steps up in firepower and connections.
Aided by a realty company. They
take over the park, start a crime wave. People start selling out, leaving. ALICIA Okay,
okay. Then a month after the last
parcel is nailed down, somebody shows up to start harassing them. Run them out
and the park is safe, somebody gets to build Yuppieland On The Park. VICTOR Somebody
called Southwest Assurance Corp, apparently. ALICIA Too pat,
Vic. VICTOR However much
I crave your intimacy, I have to say: don’t call me Vic. ALICIA Sorry. But look at it. How could somebody predict all this? And sending in thugs to beat up La Neta isn't going to make them
go away. Not when they're armed and
pissed off. And it would still be
ghetto. VICTOR But you see
the structure, don't you? And the main
point is somebody bought that land up and wants an empty park. Can you accept that? Alicia That I won't
accept. I'm going to do something about it. Victor That's what
I'm saying. To the barricades, bitch. She starts, glares, then
laughs.
SEQUENCE OF
SHOTS: Organizate MUSIC OVER: A
song of popular protest and solidarity -- Victor stands before the
group again, introduces Alicia to polite applause. She starts speaking, pauses while he translates.
-- Alicia points to an
easel with a picture of Ghandi, speaking to a group of Local Women. A
Schoolgirl stands beside her, obviously translating her remarks. She flips the Ghandi picture over to a
picture of Martin Luther King.
-- Alicia leads the group
through the park, speaking in animated fasion while pointing out strategic areas.
-- Alicia lectures the
group. A Schoolboy translates while
Victor watches from the door. Her easel shows Cesar Chavez: she flips it to a
shot of Emeliano Zapata. Victor smiles.
-- The easel shows
Commandate Zero, ski-masked leader of the Chiapas Zapatistas. Alicia directs an exercise in non-violence,
women sagging to resist being moved by other women wearing red armbands.
-- Victor looks on, nodding
approvingly. Alicia moves to him,
pointing to the group, speaking. Victor
replies, putting his hand on her shoulder.
She looks at the hand, gives Victor a look. He quickly removes it.
She laughs, holds out her palm for five and an elaborate handshake.
END OF
SEQUENCE EXT. GARAGE ROOF - DAY
Chucho, his cast covered
with gang graffiti, lies on the roof of a garage with a view of Fletcher's
house flipping a steel-handled butterfly knife open and closed. His stalking is
rewarded when Fletcher's Camaro backs down the driveway and stops behind the
house.
Chucho's eyes narrowing in
hatred as surreptitiously spies on the car.
Fletcher gets out, pulls a blanket off the tiny back seat. A man hiding under the blanket gets out and
stretches. It's Rigo, Alicia's
assailant.
The two men lay the blanket
behind the car, pop the trunk to unload a collection of ammo, assault weapons,
and shotguns. Rigo hefts two identical rifles with grenade launchers under the
barrels.
RIGO Joo know who
jure fockin' wit'? FLETCHER So Corso's
sure these are the ones he showed to those La Neta lamos? RIGO Positive. It's beautiful. He even got them to load some magazines before he priced them
out. Their prints are over all over the
clips, slugs, receivers. FLETCHER Nice to work
for somebody who isn't a moron for a change.
Rigo Long as the
checks are good I don't care about their IQ scores. They carry the arsenal into
the house.
EXT. BARRIO STREET - Day
Chucho is running as fast
as a kid with a big cast can move, pumping up the street with clinched teeth.
He uses his cast to swing
around a light pole, jumps a fence, vaults onto a porch and blasts through a
front door.
INT. CHUCHO'S HOUSE - DAY
Heaving mightily, Chucho
leans over a table, cowing DORA, a busty girl in typical gang "jaina"
dress and make-up.
CHUCHO Don't fuck
with me, Dora, this is the bomb. Where
the fuck's Indio? DORA You’d know if
you'd been around, chamaco.
They're all gone over to the park to take out that asshole that broke
your arm. Why aren't you with them, ese? No balls? EXT. BARRIO STREET - DAY
Chucho bursts from the
house, sprints to the sidewalk. An unlucky
ten year old passes on a Stingray bike. Chucho uses his cast to swat the kid
out of the saddle. He jumps on the bike and clumsily rides off, the kid
screaming behind him.
INT. ALICIA'S OFFICE - DAY
Alicia, brow furrowed,
tries to fathom a grubby mope showing her yellowed "documentation"
from plastic shopping bags.
Suddenly her door slams
open, scaring the street psycho into throwing paper all over the room. Chucho enters the room like the Tasmanian
Devil, grabs Alicia and tugs at her.
ALICIA Chucho? Are you out of your mind? Chucho It's jumping
off! They're going to Fletcher's and
he's got a shitload of guns. We have to
do something. It's a trap! Alicia grabs her purse and
runs. Left alone, the mope grabs his
papers off the floor and starts lovingly xeroxing them.
EXT. EL CENTRO DEL BARRIO -
DAY
Alicia and Chucho burst
through the front door onto the sidewalk, almost knocking Victor over.
ALICIA Be
happy. They're throwing a massacre for
you. Chucho
breaks for the bike, but Alicia grabs him by the cast and spins him to her
heavily graffitied Beemer. They jump in, reverse, blast away; Victor staring
after them. INT. VICTOR'S OFFICE - DAY
Inside at
his desk, Victor sits, picks up his phone, pauses. VICTOR Ah, fuck 'em
all. He hangs up. VICTOR El Diablo can sort it out. EXT. FLETCHER'S STREET -
DAY
The view through Alicia's
windshield is horrific. A line of lowriders fill the street in front of
Fletcher's house, La Neta members crouched behind them shooting up the
house.
Returning fire from the
front windows is riddling the cars and there are already a couple of bodies
lying in the street. The cars at both
ends of the line are exploded: scorched and deformed.
Alicia brakes
precipitously, gapes at the firefight.
ALICIA Oh shit! Oh God!
I have to get in there and talk to him.
There has to be a way to explain all this. CHUCHO This isn't
the sort of thing you can talk out. ALICIA There's
always something you can say to stop violence. Chucho shrugs elaborately,
climbs out of the car.
Chucho Sure, give it
a shot. Come on. Alicia jumps out to follow,
leaving her car in the street.
EXT. FLETCHER'S back yard -
DAY
Chucho stands in the back
yard, near Fletcher's Camaro. He is bellied up to the fence, his good arm
between two boards. He pulls his arm
through, holding Alicia's hand, helping her squeeze through the gap in the
fence. She brushes herself off, fluffs
her hair, and heads for the back door.
At the top of the porch,
she pauses, looks into the house through the glass paned door. An empty kitchen, an empty hall to the
living room. She raises her hand to
knock, realizes the absurdity, turns the knob.
The door opens.
Instantly Fletcher appears
at the end of the hall, pointing the rifle/launcher at her. She flinches, stares at him.
Then another shooter peers
around the other corner of the hall.
She recognizes Rigo and it all falls into place. Rigo returns to blasting out the window,
Fletcher laughs at the expression on her face.
FLETCHER Hey,
"Dee Licia"! Get on in
here. Ever had sex with machinegun
fire? You'll orgasm on full auto. Chucho pushes past her, the
knife swinging open. She grabs him by
the waist to keep him from charging Fletcher.
Fletcher laughs
uproariously.
FLETCHER First you
bring a gun to a fistfight, now you bring a knife to a firefight. Come on, get
your other arm broke, have to wipe your ass with your tongue. Sobbing in anger and shame,
Alicia drags Chucho back out the door and pushes him off the stoop. He jumps up, clutching the knife, but she
stands against the door. He subsides,
whirls the knife closed and into his pocket.
chucho Let's get out
of here, lady. INT. FLETCHER'S HOUSE - DAY
Rigo and Fletcher are
relaxed as they pour lead into La Neta.
Just a couple of working stiffs.
Fletcher racks the grenade launcher on his rifle, points it and fires.
In the street outside, a
lowrider explodes, tossing two gangbangers as it bursts into flame.
FLETCHER God, I love
doing that. Rigo It's
definitely habit-forming. FLETCHER I'd say we've
got about ten more minutes to waste these chumps and burn a trail out of here. RIGO Sounds about
right. Hey, I never got to screw that
social worker. FLETCHER She was right
here in the house, so don't blame me. Rigo Man, you
always have all the fun. FLETCHER If you're
gonna pout, I'll let you blow up that Bel Air convertible. Rigo levers the launcher,
spins into the window, fires. The explosion lights up the room.
FLETCHER Feel better
now? No more whining? RIGO It's not quite
as good as sex. FLETCHER Pays better. EXT. FLetcher's STREET -
day
The fight is still raging,
and bodies piling up, as Chucho and Alicia return to the street. She heads for her car, then veers off to a
phone booth. Chucho tags along, his eyes
glued on the fight.
A grenade ignites a
lowrider, blowing a banger onto the grass. Indio, Chucho's brother, stands up,
his clothing on fire. He takes two steps, beating at the flames, then gets two
bursts of automatic fire from the house.
He staggers, falls, lies motionless in flames.
Chucho bolts towards him,
but Alicia grabs him once again, pulls him fighting, kicking and screaming back
to the safe ground by the phone booth.
As she holds him there, he continues to scream inarticulately, sobbing.
Poker crawls to Indio,
beats out the flames, kneels over him. He looks up and sees Chucho, turns away.
He crawls to a car, points a gun over the hood and fires maniacally.
At the phone booth, Chucho
slowly collapses into a fetal position against the wall, sobbing. Alicia squats beside him, hugging him to
her.
EXT. FLETCHER'S HOUSE - DAY
The Barrio patrol car
screams up the street, siren blasting, horn honking, lights flashing. It jumps the curb to get around the ruins of
lowriders, bumps across Fletcher's driveway, smears the front lawn with a skidding
stop.
The creates a sudden
ceasefire. The driver's door opens
slowly and Cole steps cautiously from the car and faces La Neta. He holds a
microphone on a coiled cable.
The other door opens and
Rosas, crouching, glides out and faces the shot-up front of Fletcher's house.
Cole speaks into the mike,
echoing across the park.
COLE That's
it. No more of this. There's a zillion
cops on the way. Knock it off and go
home. Leave the wounded for the
ambulances. Poker stands up from behind
the ruins of his precious lowrider. As
soon as he is visible, Rigo pops up in the front window, taking a bead on him.
Rosas draws, fires in one
motion, hitting Rigo at center of body mass.
He gapes, slumping: she drills him again. She stays in her crouch, revolver pointed at the window.
Cole (Amplified) Chill out! We
will handle this. Go home. Poker They killed
our homies, Cole! COLE We'll handle
it. Backup is on the way. You guys
stand down. poker Fuck that, placa!
This is our fucking set. Cole laughs harshly.
COLE Your set? We're not a rival gang, you morons. We’re the law. There are thousands of us, with helicopters, tanks. Get your story straight. POKER One way or
the other, we're here until that cocksucker is dead. Which is
exactly the moment when that cocksucker chooses to leave. Fletcher exits the
side door, unhurried and nonchalant, heads for his Camaro at the back of the
driveway. Rosas is in action
immediately, gun out. She runs to the
corner of the house, aiming down the driveway at Fletcher. He grins at her, waves, shows her an assault
rifle.
FLETCHER Sorry to
leave you, beautiful. But I think this
says I walk. ROSAS No, it says,
"Put me down right now or get shot." FLETCHER I like your
attitude. But I'm a pro, baby. I got
you cut. We should have a drink,
though. Cole stands in the
driveway, blocking the car, hand on his holster, holding out his other palm in
a "halt" gesture.
COLE Stop. Drop
it. You're under arrest. FLETCHER Arrest? For self defense? COLE With a
machine gun and grenade launcher? FLETCHER It was
theirs. Check the prints. COLE Then you've
got nothing to worry about. Drop it and put 'em up. FLETCHER I think I
should explain something. He swings the gun up and
fires. Cole runs towards the house, but
gets hit in the side and goes down.
FLETCHER My
"little friend" says it better. EXT. PHONE BOOTH - day
Alicia sees Cole get hit,
screams and tries to run to him. Chucho
tackles her at the waist, pushes her back into the booth. Sobbing, she claws at him. He forces the doors shut and leans against
them while she freaks out inside.
EXT. FLETCHER'S yard - day
Rosas stares at Cole,
rolling in pain, holding his ribcage.
Infuriated, she steps out into the driveway and starts moving towards
Fletcher. He laughs, gives her a
thumbs-up, then swings the gun on her.
Rosas dives
into a roll, but Fletcher fires a quick burst, hitting her in the upper
thigh. She yells in pain and collapses,
but brings her revolver up to fire.
Fletcher fires again, hitting her in the upper arm. The gun flies out of her hand. Bleeding and disabled, she
crawls towards the gun, gritting her teeth in pain and frustration. A burst from Fletcher knocks her gun out of
reach. She falls over on her back.
Fletcher moves close to
her, squats for a better look.
FLETCHER Cutiepants,
you are so hot. We should get together,
I mean it. Playfully, he kisses his
index finger and leans over to touch it to her lips.
Roses snaps her head
forward, grabbing the finger in her teeth, grinding it, trying to tear it
off.
Fletcher grimaces, yanks
his bleeding finger out of her mouth, swings the muzzle of his gun into her
face.
FLETCHER I just can't
do it. You're too damn gorgeous. And got too much heart. See ya later, beautiful. He moves back to the Camaro
and opens the door, still covering Rosas and Cole. Rosas squirms in impotent
rage.
As steps into the car,
Rosas manages to get her left hand to the Glock at the small of her back. She pulls it and fires, hitting him in the
calf below the cover of the door.
He grunts, pulls his foot
into the car.
ROSAS I'm a pro,
too, asshole. Fletcher fires a burst from
the window that blows the gun out of her hand and bloodies her fingers. He pulls up the driveway, almost hitting the
fallen Rosas. He sticks his head out
the window.
FLETCHER Yeah, you
are. We definitely should hook up. Hasta la vista, baby. He throws the Camaro into
reverse, roaring back up the driveway. Rosas watches him pull away. Her hearing
is vague and echoing. Her vision is
blurry, whiting out. She slumps slowly
over on her back, staring straight up at the sky.
Cole appears, kneeling over
her, yelling at her in distorted slowdown.
Her sky clouds over to a white glare.
FADE
TO WHITE:
FADE IN: MONTAGE: THE TAKING OF THE
PARK
MUSIC OVER: A sad, stirring
Mexican ballad. -FLETCHER'S DRIVEWAY
Cole kneels by Rosas, feels
for vital signs. He looks at the Camaro
patching out in reverse. It crashes
through the back fence and peels backwards across a backyard.
He throws down towards the
Camaro, firing until his pistol is empty.
Furious, he grabs Rosas' gun and empties it after the fleeing Camaro.
He raises a portable radio
to his mouth, yelling into it while pressing Rosas' wound with his other
hand. His hands bloody, he gestures for
help.
Rosas regains a measure of
consciousness, moans. Cole is intent on
her as she moves her lips. He leans his
ear down, trying to hear what he thinks she is saying. Painfully, she raises her head, kisses his
cheek, then passes out.
-BARRIO KITCHEN
Three generations of
Chicana women prepare a meal. They hear gunfire, look at each other a long,
searching moment. The oldest woman, a
black-clad ABUELITA, unties her apron, hangs it on the door. She gives the others a look and exits. The younger women take off aprons and
follow.
-FLETCHER's House
Bleeding, his gun empty,
Cole slumps over Rosas' body.
La Neta members, still
armed and pissed, raise angry faces towards Cole, on his knees across the
street. One by one they stand and face
towards him. They start across the street.
-PHONE BOOTH
Alicia, crying and fighting
hysteria, jabbers into a phone.
-SPLIT SCREEN: PHONE BOOTH/BARRIO LIVING ROOM
Alicia on one phone,
alarmed Chicana Woman on the other.
-QUARTERED SCREEN: FOUR
LOCAL HOMES
Four different Chicana
women speak and listen to phones.
-MULTI SCREEN
The screen continues to
divide into smaller vignettes: a phone chain in operation to eight, sixteen,
thirty-two, dozens of resolute local women.
-THE PARK Cole looks up from Rosas,
sees the line of gang-bangers crossing the street towards him. He pulls a loaded magazine from his belt,
ejects and replaces the clip in his pistol, grips the pistol in both hands.
-ThE STREETS A large band of women and
children, the black-garbed Abuelita at their head, march through the streets of
Barrio Lobo. They walk resolutely,
their faces grim but unafraid.
As they march, their
numbers are swelled by more women and kids stepping out of doorways, running
out garden gates.
-THE PARK Kneeling behind Rosas body,
Cole holds his pistol low but ready, staring into the approaching line of La
Neta.
-The Street The parade of women bursts
into the street by the park. Silently,
they move into the park and the street between the gang and Cole. They take their children to the playground
and place them on swings and jungle gyms.
The sit at the table with their children.
Some move to help
Rosas. Others face the gangsters,
staring the down with the fierce, stolid face of Mexican Mother. Abuelita gives
Cole the look, he holsters his gun.
The La Neta guys look away
from the line of maternal disapproval.
They see a park full of children and women. They see a young Chicana lying wounded, their comrades shot to
pieces, their own families.
Slowly, one by one, they
stand down. Their pistols disappear,
they attempt to hide their rifles. They
slide away to put the guns in their cars.
Poker's mom comes over to
him, speaks, draws him to a table with kids. Other gangsters then head into the
park to greet their families with hangdog demeanors greeted with hugs.
An ambulance pulls into the
street, paramedics scramble.
END MONTAGE
EXT. CHAVEZ PARK - DAY
Cole stands by the
ambulance, watching the paramedics slide Rosas' gurney in and secure it. She is out, unmoving.
The paramedics grab Cole
and pull him into the car, already cutting away his uniform to examine his
wound.
Alicia runs up, grabs Cole,
holds him tightly, crying.
ALICIA Oh, God,
Cam. I saw... you're all right? Oh,
Cam... PARAMEDIC He will be,
but you have to let go and let us take care of him. COLE I'm fine,
Alicia. Look, I have to go. See you at Valley General. PARAMEDIC Great. Now can we get this girl to surgery? Cole turns to smile
reassuringly at Alicia as he gets into the ambulance. His cheek is implanted with a bloodprint of Rosas' lips.
Alicia falls back from that
sight. Cole waves, then leans over
Rosas body. The door closes, the ambulance rolls.
Alicia stands alone and
stricken amid the swarm of squad cars and increasingly joyous scenes at the
park. She stares after the
ambulance. She can see Cole's profile
through the rear window, the bloody lip print, his focus on Rosas.
ALICIA Christ, Cam.
Who can compete with that? MONTAGE: DOWNTIME BLUES MUSIC OVER:
DEPRESSING INSTRUMENTAL -ROSAS' BATHROOM
Rosas leans close to her
mirror, glaring at her bandages, picking at them impatiently. She stares into
the mirror, a picture of frustration and vexation.
-ROSAS' LIVING AREA
A very modest studio kept
in almost military style with few decorations of lived-in touches.
Rosas lies prone, feet
elevated on a dinette chair, attempting pushups. Her wounds and the bandages won't let her do it and you can see
her anger.
She jumps to her feet and
kicks the chair over, then drops again, lying on her good side to crank out
one-handed reps.
-GYM
Rosas punches a speed bag
one-handed, clumsily at first, then finding a fist/wrist/backfist rhythm.
-ROSAS'
living area She slumps in a chair by a
pile of magazines featuring weapons and martial arts, watching daytime TV.
She clenches her fist and
yells, jumps to her feet and starts jumping up and down in frustration.
-ROSAS'
BATHROOM She rips a bloody bandage
off her shoulder, revealing torn stitches. She punches the wall, crying in
frustration.
-GYM
She kicks a heavy bag,
checks the healing wound on her leg, kicks again, fiercely.
-ROSAs' BED She sits lotus-style on the
tightly-tucked bed, eyes closed, assembling a pistol. She slaps in a magazine, shoots the slide and regards the weapon
for a long moment.
Briskly, she shoots the
slide again and again, spewing rounds all over the room. She flops down on the pillow, holding the
gun across her chest. Not a happy
camper.
-ROSAS'
BATHROOM She regards her shoulder
wound in the mirror. It has healed
considerably.
Tentatively, she begins a
series of slow movements of her arm and shoulder. She moves faster, suddenly stops, glares at the offending
wound. Fists on the sink, she droops
her head, shaking it from side to side in slow resignation, then faster and
faster in fury.
END MONTAGE INT. COP BAR - NIGHT
A slightly tacky bar of the
kind cops seem to prefer. Country rock
on the jukebox, sketchy females. Darts.
Cole, carrying a fresh
drink, moves towards the dartboard, but is waylaid by a table where SMITH,
ANDREWS, and HUGGINS obvious cops despite civvies, have already had a few.
HUGGINS Yo,
Cole. Wanna judge a lesbian beauty
contest? COLE Okay, you got
me. I gotta hear this one even if it means drinking with vice scumbags. He joins them with
perfunctory nods and handshakes.
HUGGINS Yeah, what we
got. We think, you know? ANDREWS Yeah, what we
think we got. HUGGins Is a lezbo
coke ring. cole I think I saw
this on Bravo. HUGGINS True story,
my man. And that makes it a little
harder to get a handle on, you see what I mean. ANDREWS They're
already pretty underground. Their own
hangouts, signals. Tight community. SMITH And hard for
a guy to get into. Pardon the pun. COLE Don't you
have any lesbian cops working on whore stings?
Like most of them? Huggins Haven't had
much luck. They walk like cops. SMITH And talk like
men. ANDREWS And smell
like whores. HUGGINS So we're hunting
up somebody a little fresher. Queerbait
centerfold. Do some stakes, some
stings. Go deep. SMITH Pardon the
pun. HUGGINS We're
thinking about tapping the academy. ANDREWS Actually,
we're mostly thinking about reviewing the tapes. HUGGINS What is it
with that, anyway? Chicks won't pay
money to see two guys getting nasty on each other. What does that say about us? COLE That we're
sick, immature pervert bastards hung up on mommy's tits. HUGGINS Amen,
brother. Praise be. ANdrew Thank the
lord for the night time. SMITH Lez be
friends. COLE Like I said.
Look, I might have the perfect candidate for you. SMITH Your mama
might be a little old for this sort of thing. COLE Serious. She's young, cute. And bored shitless from being on medical for a month. HUGGINS But will she
do it? This is pretty above and beyond
your normal police work, you know.
People putting their hands on you. COLE Want me to
ask her? HUGGINS Absolutely.
We might could get her busy a little. ANDREWS Could she do
an audition tape? COLE By the way,
she's my partner. HUGGINS He was just
kidding around, Con. Have her call me if she wants. INT. SHELBY'S BAR - NIGHT
MUSIC OVER:
"FREE FALL ZONE" - Urgent, slamdance techno. Yes, it's definitely a
lesbian bar. One of the funner ones, a
good blend of lipstick and old school.
On either side of the blinking neon "SHELBY'S" sign, big
closed circuit screens show whatever happens in front of two remote cameras
that roam the floor, peering into booths, poking in dark corners. Must-see TV
for fans of girlplay and sassiness.
Jukebox Take
a long look at the way you look Cause
it's who you are and it's all you have Practice
your smile, touch up your style They'll
be taking you in like a photograph Put
on a pout, let it hang out The
lights are up and you're part of the cast Saunter
right in, flash 'em some skin Whatever
you want you can get it too fast Rosas, in bike
shorts and softball jersey, slides in gingerly, scoping it all out. She might as well be wearing a “BiCurious”
ballcap. Two bouncy
little Shaveheads flaunting gym muscles and damp tank tops are all over her,
but are brushed off by a somewhat older and immensely more attractive woman,
SHELBY. Of a certain
age and no uncertain pose, Shelby wears a gown that flows around her neck, back
under her arms, then around to tie in front.
As she sits on the stool next to Rosas and leans forward to speak the
dress makes it obvious she is either very well-preserved or very cunningly
restored. First
SHAVEHEAD That's it,
Shelby, always grab the pick of the litter for yourself. SECOND
SHAVEHEAD Privileges of
age, money and treachery. SHELBY It's a
privilege just not to be a hormone-addicted little idiot. (To
Rosas) So
honey. A jillion joints in the world,
why'd you walk into mine? Rosas stares around the
place a moment.
ROSAS This is
yours? Hijole, it's a really
nice place. Shelby sits very close to
her, looks deeply into her face.
SHELBY But not, you
know, all that nice. Rosas looks at the
bigscreens, which feature her burrhead buddies squeezing both torsos into the
same tank top.
ROSAS I see what
you mean. SHelby Do you now? INT. SHELBY'S OFFICE -
NIGHT
MUSIC
OVER: Stereo Playing sultry chanteuse
jazz The office seems to double
as a boudoir, really well done. Shelby
sees no reason to waste time, and backs Rosas up against a dresser, standing so
close that her breasts brush the letters on Rosas's jersey with every
breath.
Shelby strokes Rosas's
cheek, moving her hand down to her throat.
She undoes her gown, which falls away, hanging only from her neck and
revealing her entire naked back. Rosas
doesn't know what to do with her hands.
Shelby steps backwards,
sits on the bed, her gown hanging in front of her. She rolls over onto the bed, revealing her naked back to Rosas,
and undoes the strap.
Rosas stares at her, frozen
in place. Shelby smiles, motions her to
sit on the bed. Rosas cautiously sits,
looking back and forth between Shelby's inviting face and the rocking sway of
her lovely ass.
Shelby moves her head,
sweeps her eyes down her body, then back to meet Rosas' stare. Gingerly, Rosas reaches out. Her hand brushes Shelby's waist, hovers
indecisively over her buttocks, which suddenly rise to meet her touch.
Rosas is obviously gripped
by major conflict, fascinated and repelled as Shelby moves her ass against her
hand. Rosas yanks her hand back, stares
at it, then at Shelby.
Shelby chuckles, shrugs,
makes a wry face. She grabs Rosas hand
and kisses it tenderly, places it back on her own waist. Then she opens a box on her bedside table,
pulls out an ornate mirror decorated with lines of white powder.
She rolls over, swinging
her legs around Rosas, sits up facing her with the mirror between them. She hands Rosas a thin silver tube and
slides her free hand up under her baseball shirt.
Shelby So what do
you have for me, cutie? Rosas stares at the toot,
dips a finger in it, tastes it at the corner of her mouth while Shelby
unbuttons the jersey. Rosas is not
wearing a bra.
On the other hand, she's
not enjoying the toot. Just as Shelby
tweezes her nipple between two long-nailed fingers, Rosas explodes. Her hand comes up fast, shattering the
mirror into a cloud of white dust and glass splinters.
Shelby falls back in shock
and pain, but Rosas snatches her by the throat and shakes her like a ragdoll. Rosas jumps to her feet, pulling the naked
Shelby with her, and punches her in the stomach, doubling her over.
Rosas' knee spears into
Shelby's face, knocking her onto the bed.
Panicked, she rolls away from Rosas' attack, cutting her pale skin with
glass shards. She falls behind the bed.
Rosas stalks around the
bed, stares down, drops to her knees on top of her victim. She punches down at
Shelby's hidden body again and again, her face a stony mask.
Suddenly she snaps out of
it. She stands up, looks down at Shelby, then at her hands. She turns to look
at herself in the mirror. Sees a woman entirely out of control.
She stands gripping the
dresser, staring at herself in the mirror.
She reaches into her shorts and pulls out a wallet. She flips it open, takes a long look at the
badge inside.
She holds the badge up by
her face, studying both in the mirror.
She tears herself away, pockets the badge.
She walks to the bed, looks
down at Shelby, not enjoying the sight.
She reaches for a glass by the bedside, tosses the contents on the
unseen Shelby. She squats down and
leans forward, hands on the other woman.
ROSAS Hey. Hey, listen. We have to talk. Where'd
you get that shit? SEQUENCE OF
SHOTS: Dykes on BIkes MUSIC OVER: REPRISE,
"FREE FALL ZONE"
BOOMBOX Toss
back your hair and dial it on Go
for the most you can get it for Play
it by ear and hope you can hear Some
laughter through the pain Rack
up the score and try to be more Than
the final net and gain Body
count bliss, search and dismiss You're
a prisoner of warmth, you're on your own Engage
and deploy, close and destroy Missing
in action in the free fall zone BOOMBOX Better stay
fresh when you're dealing your flesh Best
learn the rules if you forget the laws Pick
up the rap, find out the traps Polish
your teeth and sharpen your claws Don't
take it hard if you let down your guard And
feel the touch of somebody else Take
it in stride, it was something you tried No
need to expose yourself Buff
your nails and burn it out Play
if for the pros in the center ring Live
in the streets and whoever you meet Will
be part of your next scene Get
on a roll, out of control Cut
it all close and clean Take
the high ground, divide and surround You're
a prisoner of warmth, you're on your own Rally
the troops, retreat and regroup Catching
the action in the free fall zone -- Agile even favoring her
shoulder, Rosas scampers up a fence and jumps to a rooftop. Creeping to the
eaves, she's at good vantage to stake out "BLAZING SADDLES
MOTORSPORTS", a run-down garage across the street. She sets up a small spotting scope, peers
into it.
-- In the scope, the garage
shows a few old taxis, but mostly motorcycles in various stages of repair. And a crowd of large, rough female
motorcycle enthusiasts wearing leathers with the colors, "DIKES ON
BIKES".
-- One of the biker gals
enters the garage from a door at the back, tosses a package in her saddlebags,
kicks over a Harley, and blats off into the night.
-- Rosas slumps low in her
pickup, squeezing a handgrip exerciser while waiting. When a hog roars out of the garage, driven by a Member with a
black backpack, she pulls out to follow it.
-- A nice, discreet façade
has a tasteful sign reading, "THE FISHBOWL: BATHS, SAUNAS,
STEAM". A smaller sign on the door
reads, "WEDNESDAY NIGHTS, LADIES ONLY". Judging from the traffic, it's Wednesday night. The Dikes On
Bikes Member swaggers out, eyeing the clientele. No backpack.
-- Down the block in her
truck, Rosas jots in a notepad.
-- One of the
"Dikes" rolls out of a "Curves"-style gym as Rosas walks by
on the sidewalk. She gives Rosas the
once-over, whistles. Rosas walks around
the corner, makes a notation.
-- In an alleyway, one
Member looks out while the other hands a gym bag in the door of a restaurant
kitchen.
-- As the two bikes roll
away, Rosas cruises the alley, counting businesses. She rounds two corners, counts down the street, notes the name of
the restaurant, "OLIVER'S".
-- Rosas takes a seat in a
working class pool-table bar, watches a Member shake hands with a female Manager
in jeans and Carhart jacket. The two
women walk to a inner door, obviously discussing the paper sack under the
biker's arm.
-- Rosas sits in her truck,
a box of shotgun shells visible on the dashboard. The box reads, "BLAMMO AMMO : NON-LETHAL". Rosas
reaches into the box, loads her shotgun.
END SEQUENCE EXT. STREET CORNER - NIGHT
MUSIC OVER:
"FREE FALL ZONE" COntinues Rosas stands by a
streetlight pole, waiting calmly.
At the sound of an
approaching motorcycle, she steps to the curb, looking in that direction.
A lowslung chopper rumbles
up, driven by a butch female Rider in Dykes colors. The bike slows for the turn.
Rosas reaches behind the
light pole, retrieves a metal baseball bat.
She swivels, steps into the swing, and swats the Rider right off the
bike.
She steps to the Rider and
squats. No signs of resistance. She opens the leather jacket, pulls out a
plastic-wrapped package and a cellular phone.
She tosses the package up
and powders it with a powerful swing of the bat. Then tosses the phone up and blasts it over the fence.
She walks to the riderless
bike, lying on its side still rumbling, lifts it up, straddles it, and roars
off.
INT. BLAZING SADDLES MOTOR
SPORTS - NIGHT
Inside the garage proper,
it's business a usual. Several
leathered Members sit around a table drinking beer and coffee. A few more
tinker with bikes. One lays under a cab
on a creeper dolly.
They barely look up as a
powerful Harley engine approaches. But
when it blasts through the door, it's not who they expect and they react... but
too late.
Rosas rides in with the
front wheel off the ground. She wears
boots and goggles; the pistol grip of her shotgun protrudes over her right
shoulder, the handle of her baton over her left. She steps off the plunging bike, lets it plow into the table,
scattering Members.
She draws the shotgun and
starts blasting, pumping, blasting. Each shot knocks somebody on their ass or
other vulnerable anatomy point. There
is no bloodshed, just rubber projectiles knocking down anybody who moves. Resistance is spotty and futile.
Rosas has been watching the
inner door, and keeping a cab between it and herself. Finally it bursts open and two Members run out, firing
pistols. Leaning over the cab, Rosas punches
them up against the wall.
Any member who moves gets
another blast.
Pumping the shotgun, then
holding it one-handed like a pistol, Rosas pulls the baton and stalks through
the garage giving the KO de grace to anybody too conscious to suit her
her taste.
She approaches the door
from the side, peeks in, enters, then returns to the garage floor, stalking
through the inert bodies of her enemies.
She pulls a cellular phone
from her jacket pocket, punches a speed-dial, waits for an answer.
ROSAS Hey, Huggins,
I got a line on your coke ring for you. (Pause
to listen) Absolutely. They're sitting on pounds of the stuff. 1635
La Mona. It's a garage, drive right in. (Pause
to listen) Yes, they're
there right now. (Pause
to listen) No rush,
actually. They'll wait. (Pause
to listen) Not
necessary. But could you bring me a 32
oz. Pepsi? She hangs up.
Rosas Like Cole
says, you have to build your own legend. She walks towards a
chair. One of the bikers groans and
lifts her head as she passes. Rosas
kicks her unconscious, sits down to wait, shotgun at ready.
She pulls out the
grip-builder and squeezes it left-handed to stave off boredom.
MONTAGE: THE
ANGEL OF PAIN MUSIC CONTINUES OVER: LAST
VERSES OF "FREE FALL ZONE"
SOUND SYSTEM Try
to look hip when you're starting to flip When
it gets to be too much for you In
the fast lane, try to maintain Get
some quick before it gets to you Prop
yourself up, pour the last cup You
gotta have guts, that's what's on the line Start
something rash, move in a flash Close
encounters of the distant kind Hold
back the tears and move on in Try
to remember what you came here for Live
on the edge, hang on the ledge And
watch the scary parts Don't
catch the fear that starting from here Everything's off the charts Make
your last stand with the last one you can You're
a prisoner of warmth, you're all alone Shot
down and shamed, falling in flames Missing
in action in the free fall zone -THE FISHBOWL
Rosas, a towel wrapped
around her, tosses her shoes into a locker and pins the key on her towel. As she walks through the glass doors from
the lockers to the baths she slides the towel down around her waist.
The tile steam rooms
present a dream landscape of naked female bodies wreathed in fog. Rosas prowls
nude through the mist and faceless flesh. Faces and bodies appear, recede.
She straddles a wooden
bench in an alcove. Women pass by
clothed only in steam.
A tall Willowy Blond
straddles her bench, facing her knee to knee.
She gives Rosas the once-over, an exploratory stroke of the thighs. Rosas arches, presenting her breast.
Blond lifts the atomizer
that hangs around her neck on a cord.
She takes a big nose hit, offers it to Rosas, who looks around into the
mist.
Willowy Blond ejects white
powder from the atomizer onto her nipples, leans forward.
Rosas strikes blindingly
fast, grabbing Blond by the hair and pulling her face down to smack the bench
between her thighs. She lifts her
bloodied face and lands a roundhouse blow that knocks Blond into the murky
corner.
Rosas rises deliberately,
steps to the dark corner, where the huddled Blond is barely visible, and starts
kicking her to pieces.
Rosas face is a study in
excitement and fury. She bites her own
lip, drawing blood.
Finished, she shakes like a
dog, flips sweat out of her hair, and stalks off into the steam.
-POSH AEROBICS GYM
Most of the resident
hardbodies eye the awesome symmetry of Rosas' glutes as they master the
Stairmaster. But the Busty Redhead with
a bod chisled by gym and surgery and artlessly displayedin lycra and peek-a-boo
has the inside track, scaling along step for step while chatting vivaciously.
-APARTMENT HOUSE ELEVATOR
Inside a moving elevator, the Redhead is all over Rosas, excited
and laughing. She takes her hands off
her ass for a minute, and pulls something out of her purse. The two huddle conspiratorially a moment.
A cloud of white powder
explodes out from between them and Rosas drills Red a good one to the
ribs. The Redhead is no pushover,
however, and replies with karate blows. But she's no match for Rosas sheer
ferocity. She takes some scary blows
before the light blinks, the door opens, and Rosas kicks her out of the car
then jumps after her as the doors slide closed.
-OLIVER'S RESTAURANT
ENTRANCE
Rosas, in a slick black
dress, clicks out of Oliver's in the company of a Black Woman dressed like Tina
Turner. Laughing together, they walk
towards the parking lot.
-LOVERS' LANE
A sleek luxury sedan is parked without lights, jostling slightly
on its expensive suspension. Suddenly
the door flies open and the dome light pops on as the Black Woman is catapulted
out onto the ground. Rosas, the black
shift down around her waist, leaps out on top of her, kneeling on her
arms. The door swings shut again and
the light goes out.
-BILLIARDS BAR
The bar is empty, after
hours. Rosas swings a cue stick, completing
her demolition of the carpenter-dressed Manager. Sated, shaking, she stomps toward the door where she saw the drug
bundle disappear.
-ANONYMOUS BEDROOM
Rosas is visible, the
victim she is pounding is not. Her face
is a stiff mask of hatred, her teeth clenched and nostrils dilated as she
batters away.
END MONTAGE
INT. EXAMINING ROOM - DAY
Rosas sits on a paperclad
examining table, wearing one of those fiendish open-backed hospital gowns that
reveals her strong back and a peek of tight rearend cleavage.
DR. SYLVIA REDFERN, a
highly attractive late thirties, expensive suit under a crisp white clinic
coat, sets a chart on the table and pockets her reading glasses.
SYLVIA Well, you
look good on paper anyway. Let's take a
peek at the scene of the crime. At her motion, Rosas shrugs
off the shoulders of the gown, lowering it to her waist. The exit wound on the back of her arm still
looks pretty bad.
Sylvia peers at the unseen
entry wound, reaches to palpate the tissue.
SYLVIA How does that
feel? Rosas shrugs. Sylvia grips her arm, moves it through a
motion range. She holds the arm
horizontal.
SYLVIA Can you lift
it over your head? Rosas seems surprised when
she can't raise her arm against Sylvia's grip.
SYLVIA See? It still
hasn't knitted in there. White tissue
takes the longest. I can already tell
I'm not clearing you back to duty for another few weeks. ROSAS Shit. SYLVIA Sorry. Let's look at the thigh wound, too. Rosas pushes the gown
aside: it slides to the floor. Sylvia's
eyes and hands move down to Rosas' leg.
If she is fetching from the
rear, we can only imagine how provocative she must look from Sylvia's
viewpoint. And Sylvia is the exactly
the type to be provoked.
SYLVIA Coming along
nicely. When was your last breast
cancer exam? ROSAS I never had
one. SYLVIA Not good. You
should start getting them every year.
You have lovely breasts; you should care for them. Sylvia shifts her gaze and
hands to Rosas chest, concentrating on palpating her breasts. Rosas stares at
her throughout the exam, her eyes wide and breathing shallow.
Sylvia steps back and
regards Rosas overall.
SYLVIA Everything
checks out fine. She steps back up, touching
Rosas knees, and places her hands palms out, on her breasts, massaging them
slightly.
Rosas continues her intense
stare, arches her breasts slightly into the touch. Something Sylvia does causes her to catch her breath.
Sylvia takes a deep breath
of her own, and moves her hands down to Rosas' thighs. Captivated by the young
cop, she's about to take a big gamble.
Whatever she does, Rosas'
eyes close, her head lolls and she shifts toward Sylvia. Sylvia speaks in a
husky purr.
SYLVIA Everything
coming along nicely. Rosas' eyes snap open and
she explodes off the table, her hands gripping Sylvia's throat as her lunge carries
them back against the wall with a thud.
She chokes Sylvia, their
faces close together. Rosas pants, her
hotly, face inflamed with anger and confusion.
Sylvia swoons in a blend of fear and sexual desire.
Very slowly, as if under
great pressure, Rosas moves her face closer to Sylvia's. She releases her throat: Sylvia draws in a
shuddering gasp of air. Rosas gasps,
too.
Sylvia lowers her eyelids,
moves her lips out, awaiting the touch.
Fighting the impulse all the way, Rosas brings her mouth closer. When their lips meet, they share a tremor.
The kiss drives Sylvia
wild. She moans, moves her head violently. Rosas throws her arms around her,
bends her over for a kiss of rising passion.
Sylvia's hands appear, clutching Rosas' buttocks and pulling her closer.
INT. SHOWER STALL - Day
Rosas seems
intent on getting extremely clean. She
scrubs diligently in a cloud of steam. The stall door opens and
Sylvia appears in a plush robe.
SYLVIA Help you with
anything, love? Rosas, startled, shoots her
a very guarded look. She looks down at
herself, embarrassed. Sylvia grabs
another robe from a door hook, motions Rosas out of the shower and slips the
robes onto her shoulders. She can't
resist a caress.
Rosas doesn't react well to
her touch, tightens the robe and draws the waistband closed with a tight
jerk. Sylvia steps away from her,
leaning on the washstand.
SYLVIA I know, I
know: this is all you need just now, right?
ROSAS Listen
I... Look, thanks for... SYLVIA You might be
all I need, too. Rosas has no idea how to
handle any of this.
SYLVIA Can I get a
good morning kiss? Reluctantly, but
expectantly, Rosas leans forward and kisses her. The two immediately fall together in a hot embrace that works
both robes open and has them panting.
SYLVIA Question is,
what do you need? INT. SYLVIA'S BEDROOM - DAY
Sylvia sits
on her bed, completely bummed, watching Rosas move around the room gathering
her clothes and belongings while avoiding Sylvia's eye. Ready to leave, she looks
at Sylvia, but is miles from knowing what to say. Sylvia starts to rise, Rosas
gives a very final "back off" gesture, both palms pushing
outwards. She waves her palms side to side in a "no mas, no mas"
sign, walks out. Sylvia slumps.
SYLVIA Aw, shit! EXT. BARRIO Lobo PRECINCT
PARKING LOT - DAY
Alicia pulls into the
parking lot, noses into a slot near the precinct storefront. She starts to get out of her car when a
dusty, "Baja-ready" compact truck with canopy squeals into the lot
and brakes in the "RESERVED FOR POLICE" spaces.
Rosas, in civilian khakis,
jumps out and slams the door. She
barges into the station trailing urgency, leaving the door open behind her.
Alicia eyes this
development, heads gingerly to the door.
INT. PRECINCT OFFICE - DAY
Cole is in the inner
office, holding a clipboard and running his finger down a shelf of office
supplies.
Rosas blows the door open
and slams into the office. He turns to
face her, smiling quizzically. His smile fades as he takes in her demeanor;
obviously extremely upset.
She opens her mouth, closes
it, clenches her fists and paces explosively.
COLE Something on
your mind, sports fan? She shoots him a wild-eyed
look, thrusts her hands into her pockets, simmers.
ROSAS Listen, Cam. COLE I'm
listening. You're not saying anything. ROSAS I need... Look,
I trust you... Can I just... Shit! Cole moves towards her,
just as she explodes out of her inarticulate fumblings.
ROSAS Cole, what
the fuck am I? That takes him aback, all
right. He makes soothing gestures,
confused.
ROSAS I need you to
tell me, Cole! I need to know! COLE Look, Novena,
you're... She thrusts up close to
him, pressing him towards the desk.
COLE Am I good
looking, Cole? Am I an attractive
woman? COLE Well, sure
you are... Frantic, she pulls her
blouse open, showing him her breasts. She
grabs him by the hips.
ROSAS Do you like
me, Cam? Do you want me? Am I... COLE Listen,
Novena... ROSAS Quit fucking
around! Kiss me, goddam it! Make me feel it! In the outer lobby, Alicia
stops in her tracks, taking in the scene.
Cole leans over Rosas
feverish face, holds her immobile while he gives her a gentle kiss on the
forehead.
Outside the door, Alicia
turns away, out of sight from the office.
She sinks into a chair, leans her head against the wall behind her.
Inside, Rosas struggles for
more intimacy, pushing against Cole. He
holds her off firmly but gently.
COLE This isn’t
going to happen, Novena. ROSAS Why? Why?
The rules? COLE You bet. You’re the best I’ve ever seen. I admire you. Hell, I love you. ROSAS Well then, what? COLE So we aren’t
going to screw in the duty station because it’s against the rules. And who are we, Rosas? ROSAS I don't know. That's what's freaking me out! COLE You know this
much. We're the ones who keep the
rules, that’s who. Rosas takes that like a
bucket of cold water in the face. She
subsides, draws away, wipes her lips.
She looks down, buttons her shirt, can't look back at him.
COLE I don’t care
what you are, Rosas, just who you are. You’re top notch. Crushed and bewildered,
Rosas turns to the door.
ROSAS Sorry, man.
Forget this crap, okay? COLE Nova, what
you are, you’re a woman. What you
decide to do about that is up to you. ROSAS Ahhhhh, fuck! She exits, flipped and
humiliated. But it gets worse: she sees
Alicia sitting outside the door, obviously in earshot.
ROSAS What are you
looking at, bitch? ALICIA You tell me. Rosas swings around,
infuriated. Cole runs out of the office
to stand between the women.
COLE Rosas, settle
down will you? Look... ROSAS You look! She looks! You got no
idea who's what! She spins and stomps out,
slamming the door.
As Cole and Alicia eye each
other sheepishly, they hear Rosas' truck fire up and patch out. Now Cole wipes his lips. Alicia gives him a weak smile.
Alicia So maybe
you’re all right, after all, Cole. COLE Am I? He slumps into a chair,
gives a violent shudder.
COLE Arrrggghhh! ALICIA No pain, no
glory. Cameron Cole, martyr to the true
faith. COLE If I were
you, I’d run. You’re fair game. ALICIA (Raises
eyebrow) Only
fair? She exits, leaving Cole in
a bit of a state.
SEQUENCE OF
SHOTS: WORKING IT OUT -- Rosas lies on her
spartan bed, staring upward, tortured and fuming. Suddenly her face relaxes and
she leaps up.
-- She runs through out her
front door.
-- She runs down city
streets, her boots pounding in a regular, military dogtrot.
-- She runs into a
neighborhood boxing gym. The desk man
nods, flips her a towel she grabs without breaking stride.
-- Still in her khakis, she
pounds crap out of a speed bag. Young
boxers stare, awed by her fury. And
damp shirt.
-- One foot hooked behind
her other knee, she grinds out pull-ups on a bar.
-- Soaked with sweat, she
skips rope at 180 RPM.
-- Standing flatfooted,
wearing striking gloves, she hooks high, then low into a leather heavy
bag. She is pumping power into the bag,
keeping it at a 45 degree angle, grunting with each blow.
-- Other boxers stand
staring at this point. She's like a
robot with the controls jammed.
--She stops abruptly,
allowing the bag to swing vertical, slamming her back on her heels. She notices the gawkers, turns to them with
clenched fists and screams a war cry.
-- She spins back to attack
the bag with a series of Thai kicks and sweeps, pounding it relentlessly, her
face blank.
END SEQUENCE INT. SYLVIA'S LIVING ROOM -
NIGHT
To a background of heavy
CLASSICAL MUSIC appropriate to her mood, Sylvia sits in a recliner, staring
into space rather than the charts in her lap.
The doorbell chimes.
EXT. HALLWAY - NIGHT
Seen through the spherical
distortion of a security peephole, a red rose seems ephemeral and emblematic.
Sylvia opens the door to
see Rosas standing bashfully by her duffle bag. She shrugs eloquently, hands Sylvia the flower.
Sylvia smells the rose,
kisses it. They stare at each other, Rosas' embarrassment and shyness mounting
by the second.
Sylvia darts out a hand,
grabs Rosas by the lapels, and jerks her into the apartment. The two roll on the floor joyously. Sylvia kicks the door shut, leaving the
duffle bag in the hallway.
INT. POSH CABERET - NIGHT
Decorated like the days
when nightclubs ruled the night, booths surrounding a dance floor with a jazz
combo playing cool and torchy from a dramatically draped stage.
The clientele are women,
with a scattering of gay males.
Sylvia and Rosas are
intimately cozy in a front booth, Rosas staring around like a kid at her first
circus.
ROSAS Man, I've
never seen anything like this. Not in
real life. SYLVIA Not many
people ever do. Which is really a
shame. A gowned female SINGER
comes on without announcement, but to a nice applause. Sylvia claps, Rosas
follows suit. Singer holds a flower
basket with sign: "ROSES $5 EACH". She ignores the audience, heavily
into a wistful/blasé Dietrich/Piaf hauteur, sings in a throaty, Frenchy lisp.
As soon as she begins, the
lights drop to two spots: one on her and the other on two dancers personifying
the lyrics. A knockout Blonde Dancer does Marilyn in white chiffon, a Blonde
Drag King goes for a gauche hyper-masculinity.
All three dance teams brush by the Singer's proferred roses.
SINGER She's
long-stemmed and outrageous Out of Texas
or Vegas A big burst
of blonde From the
society pages She's so
bloody blatant Just goddam
gorgeous She lights up
the square Like those
patio torches But does he
pant at her heels? Does he melt
in her eyes? Nah, he
elbows her ribs Like she was
one of the guys If she was
mine I'd sweep her
right off the street Take her up
to a suite Fall down at
her feet Kiss off her
clothes And place a
pale golden rose Where it
would do the most good Brother, that's what he should One supposes Cover her,
smother her Lover her
with streetcorner roses At the second verse, the
spot moves to second dance duo, a stunning Black Dancer and a Black Drag King
doing clueless pimp/player.
SINGER She's got
eyes from El Greco Straight out
of the ghetto She's got
angles as sharp As a hockshop
stiletto She's
bodacious Black Magic She's just
egregious Twitching her
tail like some Endangerous species But look at
those shoes And what's
wrong with hair? And this is
the best He can buy
her to wear? SINGER What I would
do I would
decorate her Drench her in
fur Just to hear
how she'd purr Give her red
fishnet hose And
a rare purple rose Gracing
her breast That's
what I would suggest If
he proposes To
drown her, surround her Abound
her with streetcorner roses. The bridge shuts down to a
single tight spot, Singer playing the hell out of her streetwise lesbian
shtick.
SINGER I’ve got
roses for sale Buy one or a
dozen Give them to
that sweetie That you
swear is your cousin Petals
scattered on sheets A bud pressed
in a book In a flute on
the nightstand The first
place she’ll look There's not
enough light There are not
enough hours We run out of
love But I've got
plenty of flowers... Third verse: third dance
duo, a devastating Latina Dancer unappreciated by a Chicano Drag King doing an
oblivious, macho El Pachuco turn.
SINGER She's all
hot-eyed and manic Some kind of
Hispanic With a swell
to her hips That could
sink the Titanic Carmel cream
cleavage With a
dangling rosary Lethal high
heels And exposery
hosiery But dig
Mister Macho Playing her
cool All of that
wasted On this
little fool SINGER What I'd like
to do Would be
build her a shrine Toast her
with wine Just to see
how she’d shine Then get her
to pose With one
blood red rose Clenched
in her teeth And
nothing on underneath Cherish
what she exposes Pleasure
her, measure her Treasure
her with streetcorner roses. The singer and dance pairs
bow off to a soft, but heartfelt applause. Rosas is speechless, staring at the
stage.
She turns to Sylvia and
spontaneously throws her arms around her neck, hugging her like a child. Sylvia glows, hugs her back, kisses her
hair.
INT. SYLVIA'S BATHROOM-
NIGHT
Sylvia and Rosas sit facing
each other, up to their lovely necks in bubble bath, surrounded by candles and
buffered by relaxing MUSIC from a stereo somewhere.
Sylvia leans back, eyes
closed, one hand on the tub rim marking time with the music. Rosas massages her foot, moves it to her
mouth to kiss the instep.
She moves the foot away
from her face, stops kneading it, just stares at it a moment, then at Sylvia's
face.
ROSAS Can I ask a
probably really dumb question? SYLVIA You can ask
me for the world, babe. Ask my secret
name, my darkest fear, my sinful shame. ROSAS So am I
really "Gay"? Is this
it? I'm a Lesbian? Or is this just something special? Just you? Sylvia opens her eyes and
looks at her. She sits up in the tub,
leaning forward until their faces almost touch. She puts one hand behind Rosas' neck and gives her a long, tender
kiss. She speaks in a soft whisper.
SYLVIA It's
something very special. But it's not
just me. It's also you. Rosas leans back, not
looking right at her.
ROSAS I don't
know. That seems kind of freaky. I mean, other people are queers and junkies
and things. SYLVIA Queers and
junkies and things??? ROSAS Not like
that. I guess that's cop thinking. Us versus The Others. But I meant... it seems like something
that's trouble. SYLVIA Novi, anytime
you get involved with another person, put your feelings on the line, it's trouble. ROSAS Then why do
it? SYLVIA Because it's
worth it. And it's worth having your
real feelings, whatever they are. ROSAS I just tried
to keep life simple. No complications. SYLVIA I'd suggest
that for now you not worry about anybody outside this tub. Groups, labels, samples... I'm not into
politics. What do you feel, right now, right here? ROSAS I feel better
than I ever have in my life. I love you
more than anybody I ever knew. All I
want to do is soak until the water cools, then drag you to bed. Sylvia Sounds
healthy to me. INT. SYLVIA'S LIVING ROOM -
DAY
Sylvia, curled up in her
recliner, watches Rosas cranking out one-armed pushups on the carpet.
SYLVIA Hey, Novi. Rosas answers steadily,
without breathing hard.
ROSAS Yeah? SYLVIA What's your
reaction to the idea of having sex with a man? ROSAS Nothing. I've never thought about doing it with
anybody. There's just you... and strangers. SYLVIA Well, you're
not a virgin, Novi. Rosas stops her exercise,
leaning up on one arm. She looks up at
Sylvia, puzzled.
ROSAS I don't
remember anything about that. INT. SYLVIA'S BEDROOM -
NIGHT
Rosas lies under the
covers, Sylvia sits at a vanity, putting in some last touches before bed. She glances at Rosas with raised eyebrows,
smiling.
SYLVIA Well, I'm an
MD consulting to the Police Department for half what I charge private patients.
Why is that, you might ask? ROSAS I figured
that one out. SYLVIA So I've got a
taste for rough trade. Not as rough as you, though. Christ, who is? Girls of the WWF? ROSAS (Snorts) I'd kick
those posers' pussies off. Sylvia rises, moves to the
bed and slips in.
SYLVIA I believe
you. But what if you couldn't? What if
you run into somebody you can't handle, who can do whatever they want to you,
the way you do? Ever think of that? ROSAS Well, in that
case... She reaches under the
mattress and brings out her service revolver, caresses it, clicks things on it,
while Sylvia stares wide-eyed. Rosas
lays it on the bed between them. It's
getting Sylvia hot.
ROSAS Know where we
should go sometime, instead of those nice clubs? INT. INDOOR FIRING RANGE
Sylvia sports Ruger
ballcap, shooting goggles, and ear protectors as she squints timorously down
the barrel of a large handgun. Rosas, also in cap and earmuffs, stands beside
her, coaches her with light touches, moves her elbow.
ROSAS Good. Now don't jerk the trigger. Squeeze it soft. Just like... well, you know. SYLVIA How soft
should... The gun discharges and she
jumps, yelping. Rosas spots the pistol,
smiling. Sylvia settles down, closes an
eye, and squeezes off another round.
SYLVIA Now that's
more like it. Coooool. She fires again, smiling.
Then blasts off a dozen quick shots.
SYLVIA Whoo! Yeeeehaw!
Did I hit anything? Rosas smiles at her,
shaking her head. Sylvia cocks a hip,
blows smoke from the barrel, spins the gun on her finger.
INT. SYLVIA'S BEDROOM -
NIGHT
Rosas and Sylvia tumble
around suggestively under the sheets: sounds of arousal and exertion.
Suddenly the motion stops
and Sylvia cries out in frustration. She
kicks her feet like a baby, punching the sheets, which subside to reveal the
two women's' faces.
ROSAS Sorry,
Syl. I guess I'm still not very good at
this stuff. Sylvia is unsatisfied and
unhappy, but cuddles her head affectionately.
SYLVIA No, that's silly. You're very, very good. I'm just tense is all. She gives Rosas a weary
smile.
SYLVIA You've been
wearing me out, kid. ROSAS So get some
sleep. How about I go down to the store
for some wine? Or cocoa or something? Sylvia gives her a ragged
smile, relaxes against the pillows.
SYLVIA Awww, you're
such a sweetheart. ROSAS I know, I'll
make somebody a great husband. She slips out of the bed,
pulls on her jeans and a cop-looking jacket with nothing on underneath. She steps into sandals and exits the room.
Sylvia lies still for a
moment, staring at the ceiling. When
she hears the apartment door close, she pounds her fists on the bed, shaking
her head from side to side.
She jumps from the bed and
storms into the bathroom, slipping into a silky nightie.
INT. SYLVIA'S
BATHROOM - NIGHT Framed in the mirror,
Sylvia leans on the sink counter, staring at her own face. She reaches up and pats her cheeks with both
hands, then bends down and reaches deep into the cabinet below the counter. It takes her a minute, but she finds what
she wants and pulls it out.
She places a pharmacy
bottle on the shelf below the mirror and eyes it critically. She nods her head, smiles, opens it and
looks inside.
She picks up a hand mirror
from the counter and carefully shakes out two lines of white powder from the
bottle. She caps the bottle and lifts
the mirror to her nose and takes a big whiff.
She tosses her head, sniffs and poses to snort the other line.
Just as the door behind her
opens and Rosas steps into the room.
ROSAS I just wanted
to tell you... She stops, her face going
tight and pale at the sight of the blow on the mirror.
Sylvia, busted, hunches
over the mirror then drops it and backs away, terrified at what she sees in
Rosas' face. She starts babbling in
fear.
SYLVIA Why can't I
have some fun, Novi? You get to. You get to drive too fast, shoot
people. The rest of us get in trouble
for that stuff, but you get to be a gunslinger. Enjoy your own little addictions because you have a badge. Rosas doesn't move or
speak: a smoldering volcano.
Sylvia It's just a
chemical, Novi. Just a stupid law. Not
like hurting anybody, stealing anything.
Please, don't look at me like that.
Loosen up a... ROSAS You lying,
treacherous, bitch. I thought you loved me. I thought... Rosas stops talking, goes
silently ballistic. She backhands
Sylvia off-balance, grabs her robe and throws her through the door into the
bedroom.
Crying, Sylvia lands on her
back and scuttles crab-style away from the furious Rosas.
Rosas stands in the door
fuming, betrayed and furious. She slams
a fist through the door, jerks it out and pounds it through the sheetrock wall.
SYLVIA Oh God! No, Novena!
Please, don't... Rosas comes through the
door, moving towards her with a merciless certainty.
SYLVIA Oh,
shit. You're her, aren't you? You're the Pain Angel! Oh, Christ, it is you. Rosas stops in her track,
her face strained with ambivalence. She
stares down at Sylvia, waiting.
SYLVIA Why didn't I
realize it before? You're a dark legend
in LesbiLand, kid. Nobody knows who you
are or when you show up. You just keep
hearing about women picking up this cute young thing and ending up in intensive
care. Rosas stands motionless,
listening as Sylvia speaks with a
rising hysteria.
SYLVIA Oh, it added
to the thrill, all right. I mean, the
guys had AIDS and we had you. But I'm
the one lucky enough to have you move in with me. To fall in love with you before you fuck me up. Sylvia is in an orgasmic
state of excitement/terror, hyperventilating, dilated, her legs spread, breasts
heaving.
Rosas speaks slowly,
drawing each word through clenched teeth.
ROSAS I don't want
to hurt you, Sylvia. Sylvia's eyes widen with
the shock of hope, she gasps a deep breath.
SYLVIA Then don't! Why would you want to? Rosas speaks haltingly,
breaking into a sobbing shout.
ROSAS I don't
fucking know! Sylvia stares at her,
quaking.
Rosas grabs her belt buckle
and starts unbuckling it. Sylvia is in
a panic, closes her eyes to await blows.
But Rosas
skins out of her pants and tears her shirt off. She kneels over Sylvia, shaking.
She gently touches Sylvia's cheek: Sylvia flinches away from her
hand. Rosas throws her head back and
growls like an animal. Tentatively, Sylvia reaches
up, puts her arm around Rosas' neck.
Rosas whines like a dog, shudders, then falls on her, clutching her with
abandon, burrowing into her.
Sylvia's
arms and legs come up around Rosas and she starts rocking her. Rosas continues to clutch her, sobbing
herself. Then explodes into a
compulsive sexual rapprochement, the two women thrashing wildly on the floor. INT. SYLVIA'S BEDROOM -
Day
Rosas and Sylvia lie
entwined on the floor in the early light, covered with bedclothes torn off the
bed.
ALICIA I think you
should request therapeutic leave.
You've got an awful lot going on and could use some time to deal with
it. ROSAS Snivel off
for on psych call? Not a good career
move. The force isn't like cubicle
land. ALICIA We'll make it
a medical hold. I'll recommend it officially. rosas Based on
what? Alicia gives her a
mischeivous grin, tousles her hair.
Alicia Complications. INT. SYLVIA'S
KITCHEn - DAY The couple finish up
breakfast, Rosas straddling a chair backwards, Sylvia leaning back, examining
her.
SYLVIA I had a
problem with drugs, like lots of medical people. I still like to sniff a little fun now and then, I admit it. ROSAS Not to me you
didn't. Sylvia I was afraid
to. You're so gung ho. How was I going to tell you I was breaking
the law? ROSAS Well,
yeah. I'm all about upholding the
law. It's who I am, Syl. All the way. SYLVIA And is
beating girls up part of your public service? Rosas takes awhile to
answer that, but gets it out.
ROSAS No. It's
against the law. SYLVIA What's worse,
baby? Getting a buzz... or kicking the shit out of people for doing
what you really want to do yourself? Rosas stiffens at that,
turns to stare at her.
ROSAS That's what
you think? SYLVIA Don't
you? And now you know you want it and
you... She stops in mid-sentence,
thoughtful. Rosas hangs on her words,
waiting.
SYLVIA So why didn't
you ever punch me up before? ROSAS I never saw
you with coke before. SYLVIA You think
that's what it's all about? Not
sex? Drugs? ROSAS That's what I
came after in the first place. SYLVIA What? Why?
Why? ROSAS Work,
Syl. I'm a cop. SYLVIA Oh,
Novi. For Christ's sake, girl. This is really messed up. INT. SYLVIA'S BEDROOM -
NIGHT
Sylvia and Rosas lie
spooned together in bed, Sylvia speaking into Rosas ear from behind. Rosas wears a pensive expression, trying to
figure it out.
SYLVIA I thought the
violence was all about sexual ambivalence. Trying to destroy your secret
desires. ROSAS Maybe
so. But it didn't feel that way. It was
more about the dope. Sylvia turns that one over
for a moment.
SYLVIA See, I
assumed that was your justification. Your license to kill. ROSAS I see those
white lines and something snaps. Did you notice? Sylvia rolls away, staring
straight up.
SYLVIA It's even
more complex than I thought, figuring out where you're coming from. ROSAS How about if
I show you? EXT. MIGRANT CAMP - DAY
A tattered sprawl of blue
plastic tents, cardboard huts, and palletwood shacks is mostly hidden by scrub
trees in a dry gully. Cooking smoke
wreathes the trees, women carry water up the wash in buckets, ragged children
play in the dust, rusty old cars litter the camp.
A child chasing a ball made
from a plastic softdrink bottle suddenly freezes, looks up at the rim of the
gulch, and runs towards a shack. The
other kids run behind him, looking over their shoulders.
The source of their alarm
is Rosas, stepping to the edge of the gulch to look down at the pitiful village
of trash. Sylvia steps carefully up
beside her, and stares down into the huts, shocked and saddened at the sight. There is nobody visible in the camp anymore.
SYLVIA Here? You lived in this? My God, Novi, it's... wretched. ROSAS It's hard to
tell. The camps get torn down and the
people run off. Or floods take them
out. Then they build back. But this is where I lived when I was little. SYLVIA How can
they... There's no water, no lights, no sewer... it's not legal. ROSAS They aren't
legal, either. They've been here
forever, though, one way or the other. SYLVIA And this is
where you came from. rosas I was born
here. So I am legal. I don't think of
this as U.S. territory, though. It's more like...nature. The jungle. Earth. Sylvia The wretched
of the earth. Rosas Not
really. They're the lucky ones. The unlucky ones are still over there,
picking things out of the garbage dump.
Or worse, still down in Chiapas or Oaxaca or Nicaragua or wherever they
left to come here. SYLVIA Jesus,
Novi. I... I don't know what to say.
To think. I'm going to have to
process this a little. ROSAS That's what
they're doing. The ones that'll make
it. SYLVIA Make it? Get out of that? How? Rosas I did. Some of them will, too. EXT. BARRIO DIRTPATH - DAY
Rosas and Sylvia walk down
a dirt lane leading from the encampment towards the scattered shacks of the barrio.
MUSIC comes from one of the
cribs, rancheros from a Mexican station. The two women talk to each other, seriously but inaudibly.
They pass a doorway. Two local RAPISTS, barrio scum in western
hats, boots and rags, slide out of the doorway and follow them, extremely
interested in the two beauties.
A shift in Rosas' pace and
bearing alert Sylvia, who looks behind her and grabs Rosas' upper arm in alarm.
SYLVIA Whoa, those
guys mean business. ROSAS They're more
interested in pleasure. SYLVIA I hope you
know where we're going. This is the
dark alley they warn us about. RoSAS Wait until we
turn this corner. SYLVIA Oh, I can't
wait. They turn off the path and
walk ten paces down a filthy alley that abruptly ends at a cement wall.
SYLVIA Shit, shit,
shit. There's no way out. ROSAS That's the
idea. SYLVIA Oh fuck,
we're trapped. Rosas No. They are. Rosas slides her hand into
her shoulder purse, pulls out a collapsible sidehandled baton. She pulls it open, hidden by her body, then
tucks it to her side.
SYLVIA Oh my God,
Novi. ROSAS Walk slightly
ahead of me. When I move, go over there
and turn to face me. If I back up towards you, talk to me so I know where you
are. SYLVIA This is your
combat mode here, isn't it? Jesus! It's pretty damn exciting, though. ROSAS Stick around. The pair stop ten feet from
the wall and turn around, waiting for the Rapists to catch up to them. Rosas' face is tense and wide-eyed, but her
body is relaxed as an athlete's.
Suddenly Sylvia puts her
hand on hers.
SYLVIA But look, why
do this? Why not just let them live? Rosas stares at her a
moment, unwinds a little.
SYLVIA It'll be good
for you, trust me. ROSAS You got any
ideas for getting rid of rapists in a gentle, medically approved way? SYLVIA Didn't they
teach that at Police Academy? That gets Rosas' attention.
She stares at her a moment, then glances at the Rapists, who have halted,
licking their chops. Her lips curl in hatred, but she takes a deep breath,
shudders. Sylvia touches her shoulder, nodding.
Rosas collapses the baton,
tucks it in her bag, and moves toward the entrance, Sylvia in tow. Surprise,
surprise: the Rapists move to block their path.
ROSAS Excuse me,
but we'd like to leave. FIRST RAPIST Why you want
to leave, mamacita? We just got
here. SECOND
RAPIST You ladies
want to have a little fun, que no? ROSAS We just want
to pass by without any trouble, okay? FIRST RAPIST Hey, what if
we like trouble? ROSAS Then it's
your lucky fucking day. She steps towards him,
pulls a snub-nosed hammerless revolver from her bag and jams it right into his
mouth.
In the frozen silence of
the next second, she audibly cocks the hammer.
The Rapist is immobilized,
breaks a sweat, his eyes jitterbug in fear.
His eyes dart to Sylvia in supplication.
SYLVIA Please
co-operate. I'm trying to get her to
quit killing assholes. ROSAS Take out your
wallets and drop them on the ground. I
hope you do something I don't like. I'm
not convinced killing assholes is such a bad idea. The assholes obey,
instantly.
ROSAS Did you just
piss your pants? Or do you always smell
like this? The guys is too scared to
speak. Rosas looks disgusted.
ROSAS Is there
valid ID in those wallets? Both men nod vigorously.
ROSAS Good. I'll
know who you are. And I'll keep an eye
out for you. If I were you I'd get out
of this area. And stop bothering women. SYLVIA They can go,
right? ROSAS If they
hurry. They hurry.
SYLVIA Well, that
was pretty exciting, too. I'm so hot I
can barely walk. Rosas stares like a
predator after the fleeing men, her gun still drawing bead on their fugitive
asses. She is close to exploding from
conflicting impulses. She trembles, her
nostrils flared.
Sylvia steps very close to
her, pushes the gun down with effort.
The Rapists round the corner and Rosas turns to face her, looking savage
and aroused.
SYLVIA Oh God,
wait'll I get you home. Rosas pushes her up against
the wall, leans into her.
ROSAS What's wrong
with here? INT. SYLVIA'S BEDROOM -
NIGHT
Rosas and Sylvia lie in
bed, après-sex postures and moods.
Sylvia strokes Rosas thoughtfully.
SYLVIA I think I get
it. Do you? ROSAS How the hell
would I know? SYLVIA You fought
your way out of that cesspool to be a cop, right? And if you break one rule, don't cross one "T", you’ll
fall back in. ROSAS Maybe. It makes sense, I guess. SYLVIA How did you,
anyway? I've never gotten clear on the
details. ROSAS How did I
what? SYLVIA Get out of
the gutter? End up in the Academy? ROSAS They took me
out, really. Put me in group homes. SYLVIA That's
horrible. How did you ever cope with
that? ROSAS Fought. Won. SYLVIA You always
won? ROSAS You had
to. Anyway, I got emancipated, got that
scholarship. SYLVIA Community
College? ROSAS Yeah. Athletics did me a lot of good on the force,
too. Softball, judo: they still like
jocks in the department, even chick jocks. SYLVIA And it got
you an education. ROSAS Sure. But what was more important to me, it was a
place to stay. Dorms, you know. But I had my own place to live. SYLVIA Could you
have gone on to a four year school? ROSAS I think
so. Girl's soccer was getting big. San
Diego State talked to me. Arizona. SYLVIA Are you sorry
you didn't do that? ROSAS I guess. Looking back, with a few years experience
like that I might have been able to make the Mexican women's team. Be in the Olympics and shit. Almost their whole team is from U.S. college
programs. SYLVIA I meant
educational opportunities. Rosas I'm not much
of a brainiac, Syl. I locked in on Police Science right off the bat. A.A. and Academy was all I needed. They have
funds to continue, get a Bachelors on the job.
Help me make Sergeant. SYLVIA Why Police Science? For you? ROSAS Well, I
always, when I see cops it's like they're the good guys. They're clean, in control. They'll rescue
me. Us. SYLVIA Maybe they
took you out of your home environment? ROSAS Who
knows? That's probably why I didn't
gangbang, do crimes like everybody else.
I didn't want to fuck over cops.
Be the bad guy. SYLVIA So you went
from Barrio Shithole to live in gyms, dorms, barracks. ROSAS Yeah. Especially gyms. I love that, you know?
Hard, mindless exercise. Just
crank it out. SYLVIA Your body was
the only thing you could count on. And
it took care of you pretty well. ROSAS Until this. Sylvia shoots her a sharp
glance, then relaxes.
Sylvia Until you
found out it isn't bulletproof? That's
what's scaring you, isn't it? You can't
count on your bod to win them all. ROSAS Getting
handled on stretchers and beds and shit?
Lying in the hospital?
Fuck. Fuck that! SYLVIA Your body
didn't let you down, honey. Your
emotions did. Your macho bushido code. ROSAS Maybe
so. What can I do about it? SYLVIA I'm working
on that one, kiddo. I really am. Rosas rolls over, looks her
in the face.
ROSAS Can you work
on that? Fix up, you know,
feelings? Reactions? SYLVIA It's not an
exact science, that's for sure. But
there's something I see going on. A
picture that won't quite come into focus. ROSAS What? SYLVIA Sex. Drugs.
Rock and Roll. Rosas tenses, her stare
becomes guarded.
ROSAS Dope has
nothing to do with me. SYLVIA It might be
what you're all about. The messed-up
part anyway. You think about it... Rosas jumps out of bed,
highly agitated.
ROSAS To hell with
that shit. SYLVIA Nothing you
know about. I'm betting men. Men with drugs. Does that ring any bells? Rosas turns violently
away. She pulls on sweatpants and
jacket, heads for the door. Sylvia
stares, shocked.
ROSAS I'm out of
here. At the door she turns,
steps back to the dresser, pulls the gun out of her bag. She glares at Sylvia.
ROSAS While you're
fixing shit up, think about this one.
How many more girls are those two assholes going to have their fun with? She tucks the gun in her
back waist, under the windbreaker, and heads out the door again.
SYLVIA Novi! Rosas turns in the doorway,
ready to escape.
SYLVIA Do you know
one major thing that fixes messed up feelings? ROSAS What? What? SYLVIA Having
somebody love you and touch you and care about you. Rosas looks at her a
minute, wheels turning.
ROSAS That's really
true, huh? SYLVIA Cross my
heart. Rosas shivers,
vacillates. She pulls the gun out,
empties it, tosses it on the bed. Then
she turns, steams off, calling over her shoulder.
ROSAS Thanks,
Syl. I'll see you later. Sylvia slumps on the bed,
staring after Rosas. She picks up the
gun and examines it critically. She
holds it by the grip, points it. She
sits up, points at her refection in the mirror, pulls the trigger. She flinches at the click of the hammer, so
she pulls it again, then again.
She lays back on the
pillows, carefully tucks the gun underneath them. She reaches to turn out the light, then speaks to herself in the
darkness.
SYLVIA (O.S.) Okay, I see
where this needs to go. INT. CHURCH BASEMENT -
NIGHT
Sylvia looks
at a bulletin board with AA and NA notices beside the usual church
announcements. Another woman moves up beside her. CHURCH WOMAN Glad to see
you coming back. The program works if
you work it. SYLVIA I've slipped
a little. But I'm lucky. I was never as heavy into it as some of these people
were. Church woman Some people
never quit until they hit bottom. Some
see the bottom coming and figure out what to do about it. SYLVIA I lucked
out. CHURCH WOMAN You mean your
higher power came through? SYLVIA Yeah. And somebody gave me a wake-up call. CHURCH WOMAN Great. But you know you have to do this for
yourself. Nobody else can keep you
clean. SYLVIA (Smiling) What if
they’re a cop? CHURCH WOMAN If cops could
make us quit, nobody would have a problem, would we? SYLVIA Good point. Sylvia points to bulletin
board.
SYLVIA Do you know
where Room 11 is? CHURCH WOMAN Upstairs. You know that’s not really a 12 Step
Program, right? SYLVIA It is what it
is. Thank God. INT. CHURCH MEETING ROOM -
NIGHT
Sylvia and Rosas stand in
front of an open door. Rosas is
reluctant, intimidated. Sylvia rests her hands on both her shoulders, looking
intently into her face.
SYLVIA Look at it
this way. What can it hurt? Sit there for an hour. Nobody is going to make you do anything or
say anything. Just listen, then walk
out here. Rosas doesn't like it a
bit, but sullenly nods.
SYLVIA I'll be right
here at nine. Okay? Rosas steps to the door
sill, looks back at her, heaves a breath and enters the room. Sylvia gently pushes the door closed behind
her.
The door has a number:
"11" And a handwritten paper
sign: “ADULT SURVIVORS OF CHILD ABUSE
TUE 7:30-9”
INT. CHURCH HALLWAY -
NIGHT
Sylvia paces the hallway,
drawn and nervous, glancing at a big wall clock that says it's minutes to nine.
The door opens and Rosas
practically lunges out of the room, tearful and agitated. Sylvia opens her arms and Rosas runs into
them, breaking into open sobs.
Sylvia's puts an arm around
her shoulders, another cupping the back of her head, rocks her gently, smiling
and tearful.
Other women
file out of the room. As they pass, they pat Rosas back or forearms, murmuring
support. A tiny, very Indian, woman
leaves the office with a baby at her breast and three more in her wake. Sylvia holds the door open for her, steps
in, and takes the seat Alicia motions to.
ALICIA Can I help
you? I hope so. I could use a win today, however small and
insignificant. SYLVIA I know
exactly what you mean. I'm Dr.
Redfern. Sylvia. ALICIA Alicia
Childers. Human race, retired. Sylvia smiles at this,
Alicia returns a tired version.
SYLVIA You used to
be at Child Protective Services, right? Alicia is instantly on
guard.
ALICIA Do I know
you? SYLVIA Consulting
physician with the P.D. ALICIA That has
something to do with me? SYLVIA No. I've heard of you, though. ALICIA Great. SYLVIA Please don't
take me wrong. I don't blame you for anything you did. I think you should get a medal. ALICIA The assault
and battery medal. I just bloody love
it. SYLVIA It might be a
better world if they let people like you and Novena just go out there and mop
up rapists and child molesters. ALICIA Novena? Are you talking about Rosas, the cop? SYLVIA Also a bit of
a vigilante. ALICIA Tell me about
it. SYLVIA I was hoping
you could tell me. ALICIA Okay, you've
completely lost me. SYLVIA She was a CPS
case. Placed in the foster system. I'd like to see her records. ALICIA I could get
them. By pulling favors, breaking fifty rules and a few laws. So there is the
question. SYLVIA Why should
you? I understand. I'm supposed to
clear her back to duty. I'd like to know more about her early background. Than she knows herself. She worries me. ALICIA (Sour
laugh) She worries you? Sylvia gives her a leading
look.
ALICIA You know her
partner, Cameron Cole? SYLVIA Just the
name. ALICIA Well, since
you're so up on my background, I'm surprised you don't know he and I were an
item. After my arrest. Well, during, actually. SYLVIA Ah. ALICIA That's what I
said. And I think there's a chance we
could be something again. Except he
drives around at night with this cute little sexually disturbed partner. SYLVIA Well, I... ALICIA Who's also
known to get him shot. SYLVIA It sounds
like we have a mutual worry, then. Can
you help me out on this? ALICIA Oh, you bet
your ass I will. SYLVIA And I assume
you wouldn't mention any of this to her partner. ALICIA And give her
a sympathy rap on top of everything else?
Fat chance. INT. DOWNTOWN JAIL - Day
Rosas, in civvies, talks to
NUGENT, a chunky blond female cop. They stand just out of earshot of a holding
cell occupied by ANA, a skinny chola somewhat worse for the wear of drug
abuse and street traffic.
ROSAS Medical
leave. Another week or so. NUGENT Oh,
right. So, you know Miss Congeniality
here? ROSAS Not
really. Face in the crowd. nugent She's some
guy in La Neta's "jaina".
Says she has information you want.
Needs some slack. ROSAS You got any
to cut? Nugent laughs cynically.
NUGENT I don't have
as much on her as she thinks. If she hadn't asked for you, she'd have walked by
now. Rosas Perfect. I owe you one, Nugent. NUGENT No
problemo. She's freaking about her
kids. Scare the shit out of her, we let
her walk. ROSAS Can you dump
her in the Blue Room for me? nugent You got it.
Hey, get well soon. You're missing all this fun. EXT. INTERROGATION ROOM -
Day
Rosas leans back in her
chair, elaborately unconcerned about the fate of Ana, who hunches forward over
the table, extremely concerned with her immediate destiny.
ROSAS Look. Even if I knew what you think is so
important, what could I promise you? It's a cold collar and they're already
down there writing you off. ANA Ay, porfa.
Please. I can't leave my girls
over there with him. He... ROSAS Your best bet
is tell me why I'm in here on my day off.
Then I'll tell you if I can do anything. ANA Okay. Okay. Listen, I heard you're interested in
this guy. A shooter. ROSAS Depends. Who'd he shoot? ANA Who you
think? You. That information galvanizes
Rosas. She drops her nonchalant air,
rocks forward into Ana's face.
ROSAS Here's the
deal. You tell me everything you
know. Everything. I'll make a call and
you'll walk out of here right now. I’ll
drive you over to your kids myself. Ana Ay,
gracias. I... ROSAS But Nugent
and Aquilar are going to be really pissed.
They're dying to get you back in here and hang serious time on your
ass. If you screw up, you won't be
seeing your brats at all. Entiedes,
Mendez? ANA I
understand. Thanks for... ROSAS What do you
know about this guy? ANA I don't
really know anything... Rosas stands abruptly,
knocking her chair over, and heads for the door.
ANA Wait. No, wait!
My ruco, ShyBoy. Paco
Hernandez. You know him? He knows when it's going down. EXT. CESAR CHAVEZ PARK -
DAY
Several young cholos
claiming La Neta, including Shyboy and Hoodlum, sit on a picnic table smoking.
HOODLUM Look out, compas. It's Two Gun Novena. ROSAS Everybody but
Paco can leave. Now. The cholos are
indecisive about this, some starting to move, others breaking petulant.
Rosas grabs one of them by
the arm and jerks him off the bench onto the ground. He jumps to his feet, furious, she slams her hands in his chest,
drives him back a few feet.
ROSAS Keep
walking. Out of the park. She turns back to the cholos,
who are all standing.
ROSAS Everybody.
But ShyBoy. Leave. Now. The gangsters and wannabes
trail off, muttering and posing.
Hoodlum and ShyBoy stay put.
HOODLUM Fuck this,
ShyBoy. You don't have to take shit from this bitch. He slugs ShyBoy on the
shoulder, motions to him.
Hoodlum C'mon, carnal. We're outta here. ROSAS What are you,
in charge of him? HOODLUM We're road
dogs. Fuck with him, you fuck with me. ROSAS So who are
you? HOODLUM Hoodlum. ROSAS Beautiful. Why don't you all just call yourselves
"Asshole"? You could get
rubber stamps to do your graffiti faster. Rosas spins, kicking
Hoodlum's knees out from under him. He
falls to his side but Rosas grabs a flailing arm and twists it behind his back,
plastering his face to the table with a sickening thump.
She jerks his dangling
chain, producing a heavy-duty trucker's wallet, which she opens and examines
while Hoodlum sputters impotently on the table top.
ROSAS Well, it
doesn't say "Hoodlum" here.
It says Tomasino Flores. Hoodlum You can't do
this. Police brutality! ROSAS I'm off
duty. This is personal brutality. She tugs his arm,
generating a yelp of pain, then twists it again to spin Hoodlum into a seated
position. She looks at ShyBoy and
glances at the bench. He immediately
sits down. She fixes the two with an
unforgiving stare.
ROSAS We need to
talk. INT. HOODLUM'S VAN - DAY
Through the cracked
windshield and dingleball fringe, it's just one abandoned warehouse on a block
of several others. The mesh gate in the
block wall has fallen down.
Hoodlum and ShyBoy point it
out like they found El Dorado.
ROSAS Okay, so
that's where. Let's get to when. And
who. HOODLUM Next couple
of days. We're gonna know. ROSA Okay, let's
get to why. You guys are fifth string
losers. You're talking about big boys
here, big money, big dope. So, why? hoodlum We've muled
for them, before. Stood pony. SHYBOY But what it
is, my prima hooks up with this guy who drives for them. He told her, talking big shit. When they call him for this he'll be in bed
with her. She'll call me if she gets
paid. ROSAS I can arrange
that. But let's get back to why Fletcher will be here. SHYBOY I don't think
that's his name. ROSAS You think,
Paco? Bring him into this thing for me. HOODLUM The driver
brought him to see them. ROSAS How do you
know? HOODLUM ShyBoy
said... ROSAS Then let's
let him tell it. SHYBOY That's
it. Thing was, he's telling her this
guy is like this street samurai.
Freelancer. Ex-cop, straightup
killer. Well known. ROSAS And he drove
him. Wow. Was your cousin impressed? SHYBOY I guess. She asked what he looked like. ROSAS Aha. SHYBOY Same Elvis
glasses, missing finger. It's the guy
who did Indio and Payaso and.. ROSAS Grumpy and
Sneezy and Sleepy. I got it. You're
going to hook me up on this then? When
it jumps off? SHYBOY Sure. But you'll owe us, right? HOODLUM See, we were
thinking we could cut ourselves in here.
All that money and dope on the table... SHYBOY But these
guys are out of our league. You... ROSAS Could swing a
SWAT truck, right? Come in, bust it up,
give you guys the dope for being good citizens? HOODLUM All we're
saying, you'll owe us. Que no? Rosas takes a pause and a
breath.
ROSAS You got
it. You put me there with Fletcher and
I owe you. INT. ALICIA'S OFFICE - DAY
Sylvia and Alicia face each
other across the desk. Two aged manila
folders lie between them.
ALICIA Reading
between the lines a little, I get the impression Moms wasn't so much a bag
whore as a coke pimp. Rented out little
Novena in exchange for her buzz. Sylvia stares at her,
shocked speechless. Alicia shrugs.
ALICIA It
happens. I've seen worse. SYLVIA Wait. You read her files? ALICIA Why? You can
see them but I can't? SYLVIA I'm an
official physician with her case on my desk.
Determining fitness to return to duty. ALICIA So official
you have to come in here and get me to sneak these files for you? Are you a psychiatrist? SYLVIA No, a GP. ALICIA Too bad. As far as I'm concerned she's emotionally
unfit for duty. She loses control,
kills people. SYLVIA You, on the
other hand, never lose control and attack people. ALICIA And I was
unfit for duty. I admit it. I took a long time off, got therapy, changed
jobs. You know what he did to her,
right? SYLVIA Just what I
got from the news. ALICIA Trust me, he
had it coming. I've been through the
mill of programs, counseling, all that.
And I'm stuck here serving this community for another two years. I hope that satisfies you. SYLVIA It's fine
with me. I am curious about how you
continued to work in this field after that.
I would think... ALICIA It was a
ticklish situation for them. Lots of
people thought I should get a medal. SYLVIA (Smiling) So I hear. I
sense a very delicate political arrangement here. And some heavy pull somewhere. SYLVIA Thanks for
your support. But we were talking about
the volatile Señorita Rosas. SYLVIA She has
violence and anger issues. ALICIA I was there
when she got shot, did you know that?
And when Cam got hit. God, that was a day from hell. She shudders slightly at
the memory, recovers.
ALICIA You should
have seen Rosas. She strutted out there
like Gunfight at the OK Corral. She's a gunslinger. SYLVIA She's all of
that, all right. ALICIA But I don't
think it's all that OK. Cops like her
get people hurt. SYLVIA We agree. I'm
trying to help her. That's why I want
these files. ALICIA And what,
exactly, is your relationship with her? SYLVIA I'm assigned
to her evaluation. ALICIA Of gunshot
wounds. That has nothing to do with this material. I think it's a personal matter. SYLVIA It is. I'm very interested in seeing her get it
together. Alicia studies her for a
moment, comes to a conclusion.
ALICIA So little Ms.
Nailcakes is a muff-muncher? Now it all
makes sense. SYLVIA You read her
history and talk about her like that?
Boy, you're some kind of social worker. ALICIA The kind who
thinks backgrounds explain, but don't excuse. SYLVIA Well, to
answer your bitchy, unprofessional question, it remains to be seen if she's
queer or not. I certainly am. ALICIA Look, no
disrespect or anything, okay? Actually,
you made my day. SYLVIA Like I said,
we'll see. If all you've got going for you is being heterosexual, it might not
be enough. ALICIA Look, I said,
no disrespect intended. I hope she's okay. I really do. Here: good luck. She leans forward and
pushes the files at Sylvia, who scoops them up and slides them into a shoulder
bag.
SYLVIA She's already
turned some big corners away from solving everything at gunpoint. INT. SYLVIA's BEDROOM - DAY
Rosas sits on the bed, a
twelve gauge riot gun across her thighs.
Beside her is another box of shotgun shells, this one labeled:
"DEER SLUGS". She racks
several shells into the shotgun's magazine, then stands and moves into the
closet with the shotgun and the rest of the box.
EXT. TRUCK RENTAL OFFICE -
DAY
Seen through glass doors,
Rosas, in jeans, warm-up jacket and Dodgers cap, takes a receipt and keychain
from a Desk Clerk. She walks through
the door just as a two ton rental truck pulls up.
The Driver steps down,
waves her in. Rosas climbs up, adjusts seat and mirror, fastens her seat belt.
INT. SYLVIA'S APARTMENT -
NIGHT
Sylvia and Rosas face each
other over a kitchen table. The files
from Alicia are spread out between them and Rosas is very attentive to them and
to what Sylvia is saying.
SYLVIA It doesn't
explain anything away. But it gives you
a lot to help make your own explanations. ROSAS And that'll
help straighten me out? SYLVIA Have you ever
heard that knowledge is power? It's
really true about self-knowledge. It's
almost like we do screwed-up things just to find out what the story is. ROSAS And you've
got my story for me there in those files? SYLVIA More like a
piece of a puzzle. I think I can fill
in some blanks. Rosas starts to reply, but
her cellular phone rings. She looks at
Sylvia apologetically, answers the phone.
ROSAS Rosas. Let me... Her face hardens up like a
door slamming. She gives Sylvia a blank
look, cups the phone.
ROSAS Sorry, Syl.
I have to take this. INT. HOODLUM'S VAN - NIGHT
Hoodlum and ShyBoy slump
low in the front seats of the van, listening to crappy barrio MUSIC as they
creep along a street lined with warehouses. Hoodlum holds a cellular phone to
his head.
Through the windshield
Fletcher's Camaro is barely visible, edging through the gate of an warehouse
yard.
HOODLUM It's him all
right. No cabe duda. So look, you owe us, okay? Okay? He lowers the phone, snaps
it shut.
HOODLUM Man, what a
straightup bitch. INT. SYLVIA'S APARTMENT-
BEDROOM - NIGHT
Sylvia sits on the pillow
of her bed, watching aghast as Rosas dresses out for action, delicate lingerie
disappearing under a Kevlar vest and generic khakis.
She straps on her
six-shooter in a lowslung, legstrap nylon SWAT holster, the Glock at the small
of her back. A second automatic hangs
under her left arm. On the right side
of the shoulder rig is a carefully sculpted hanger.
Rosas slides the closet
open and pulls out a black duster-style overcoat. The pistolgrip riot gun hangs inside it. Sylvia is freshly horrified.
SYLVIA That's been
there all this time? Hanging in my
closet? ROSAS I've been
hiding here, too, maybe. Now I'm going
back out to be me. Sylvia points to the
shotgun, fighting hysteria.
SYLVIA That's who you are? No, Novi, that was your closet. That
was where you hid from yourself by hurting other people. Can't you see that? Rosas stops, looks at her,
thinking it over.
ROSAS Maybe you’re
right. I don't know. Maybe I'll find out. SYLVIA Or you'll be
found dead. Or kill somebody else. Oh,
Novi, you've come so far. Don't slip
back into... that. Rosas hangs the shotgun
under her right arm, pulls on the duster, practices her reach for both twelve
gauge and pistol. She checks her rig in
the mirror, fluffs her hair.
Sylvia comes off the bed,
approaches Rosas with some caution.
She's beside herself.
SYLVIA No! I won't let you do this. I'll...
I won't clear you for duty.
You're not operating legally, Rosas. Rosas turns slowly,
displaying her combat-operational mode to Sylvia, who shrinks from the sight.
ROSAS Any of this
look legal to you? Sylvia summons her bravery,
stands up to her.
SYLVIA I'll call the
station, Novi. I'll follow you. I'll do
anything to... Rosas puts her hands on
Sylvia's shoulders. Lightly,
affectionately. Firmly.
ROSAS A girl's
gotta do what a girl's gotta do. She kisses Sylvia
lingeringly on the lips, then steps away, turns and exits the bedroom.
living room At the apartment door,
Rosas does a last minute check-over, pulls handfuls of shells from the duster
pocket for a look, pats her pockets, checks her flashlight beam.
Sylvia stands behind her,
stricken, but resigned. Rosas turns to her, apologetically.
ROSAS However this
comes out, I won't be coming back. To stay, I mean. SYLVIA I know I'm
too old for you. I was hoping you'd get
older, too. But this isn't the way that
happens. ROSAS No, it's that
I'm too young. Too mixed up. I figured out I need my own identity. I love
you, Sylvia. I'm sorry. SYLVIA (Tearfully) Don't be.
It's what I do: patch up cops until they're strong enough to dump me. ROSAS It's not... SYLVIA It's okay,
Novi. You barely even scare the crap
out of me anymore. I have my eye on a
cute young suicide bomber. Rosas smiles, tears up,
steps toward her. Sylvia, choked up,
motions her away.
SYLVIA Go on, go
louse up your recovery. Get your tits
blown off. ROSAS One thing,
though. If I do come back, you'll know
it's for real. And so will I. She turns, exits, softly
closes the door behind her.
BEDROOM Sylvia stands on the
bedroom lanai, looking down at the parking lot. Rosas strides into view, unlocks the rental truck, swings up into
the cab, starts up and pulls out.
At the lot exit, the truck
signals a turn before pulling into the street and disappearing into the night.
SYLVIA Always signal
turns. The law is nothing it not a collection of small observances. She steps inside, gets a
candle from the collection by the bed, sets it in the window and lights it. She
looks outside a minute, then kneels in front of the candle.
SYLVIA Is there a
novena for the living? EXT. HILL ABOVE
WAREHOUSE - NIGHT Hoodlum's barrio van is
parked in a dirt lot on a hillside overlooking the same warehouse. Rosas coasts up in her rental truck, steps
down and approaches the van from the blind spot, shotgun ready.
INT. HOODLUM'S VAN - NIGHT ShyBoy hits on a small
glass pipe just as the side doors of the van wrench open and Rosas flows into
the van with her shotgun sweeping the interior and coming to rest pointing at
the back of Hoodlum's head.
He chokes, tosses the pipe
out the window.
Rosas takes a kneeling position behind and between them, stares
through the windshield at the warehouse below. ROSAS What's our
situation, here? HOOLUM We're sitting
in my van with some hardon bitch pointing shotguns at our heads. ROSAS I'm
protecting and serving you assholes.
What's up down there? HOODLUM Your
boyfriend got there early. Drove this
magnumed-out Camaro into the warehouse.
He's the surprise party, I'd guess. SHYBOY The sellers
got here, too. I didn't recognize any
of them and the guys her novio works for are supposed to be buying. ROSAS They have
cars inside? HOODLUM Just one, a
fucking Hummer. You see the two
outside? Rosas Hard to miss
a Mercedes and Lexus sitting on the street in this area. Any more lookouts? HOODLUM We didn't see
any. ROSAS Good. I'll take it from here. You two stay here. Inside the van. Hoodlum Look, you're
going to... ROSAS Stay here in
the van, both of you. I'm serious. HOODLUM Yeah, but
hey, you owe us, right? Rosas exits the van. Hoodlum raises his voice so she can hear him
outside.
HOODLUM Right? Rosas appears at the van
window.
ROSAS Quiet, you
idiot! Stay here. HOODLUM But we got it
comin', right? Rosas Right. Sure.
Now shut up and sit tight. The cholos look at each
other as they hear the rental truck quietly start and creep away.
HOODLUM That placa
bitch is going to fuck us over, mano. Shyboy Yeah, you
bring a rental truck to a thing like this, you got to figure moving some
weight. HOODLUM Shit, knowing
her it's full of ammo. She'll destroy
the dope, kill every motherfucker in the area code. Shyboy Then give us
the money, right? HOODLUM Yeah,
right. You coming? SHYBOY Let me get my
shit. Protect our investment. He tugs a pistol from under
the seat, sticks it in his waistband.
The two cholos exit the van.
INT. WAREHOUSE - NIGHT
Inside the warehouse, the
Hummer is parked in a clear space on the concrete floor, its headlights
illuminating a pile of footlockers. A
Seller's Thug sits nearby at a battered steel table. Several other Thugs are in evidence around the Hummer.
There is indication of bad
faith in the upper walkways and rafters:
several concealed Shooters with assault rifles and even infrared night
vision goggles.
EXT. STREET SCENE - NIGHT
The buyers arrive,
cautiously driving two Mercedes up the street and through the gate into the
yard. They ghost by the sellers' lookout cars, which look menacing but empty.
QUICK SHOT of the rental
van interior shows their drivers lying cuffed and unconscious.
A third car trails them,
takes up a sentinel position on the street.
All quiet so far.
Suddenly Rosas leaps down
from the top of a wall, her duster streaming behind her. She lands in a squat beside the curb window
of the sentry car, her shotgun pointing at the lookouts inside.
She tosses them plastic
cuffs, signals wordlessly for them to secure themselves to the wheel and each
other. She reaches in to take their
guns and cellular phones, tosses them over the wall.
INT. WAREHOUSE - NIGHT
Rosas prowls in the dark,
slinking along walls and catwalks, spotting positions of the concealed
Shooters, on the lookout for Fletcher or other bad surprises.
She sees a slight dispute
over the footlockers.
MAIN SELLER Look we've
got exposure here. You show us some
money before we open up anything. The Main Buyer gestures to
an Underling holding a large metal camera case.
MAIN BUYER You're exposed? There's three million right here. And my ass. MAIN SELLER So you show
me yours, I show you mine. MAIN BUYER That's what
I'm saying. Main SELLer What are we,
virgins here? Okay, we both open up, give a peak, then lock back up until we're
sitting down and dealing. Is that cool? He nods, an underling
carefully lifts one of the trunks, sets it down close to the Buyer.
Meanwhile, Hoodlum and
ShyBoy creep along the periphery of the warehouse, checking out the scene and
whispering to each other in excitement.
SHYBOY Barbaro! Look at all that, shit, mano. Hoodlum Fuck the
shit. He said three million! Three motherfucking million! Shyboy Wait up, carnal.
There's the blow, there's the money.
Where's Rosas? And where's that
machine gun vato? Unfortunately, their big
eyes for the prize cause them to overlook one of the hidden Shooters. Who spots them in the green glow of his
nightscope, seeing two intruders with guns in their belts. He opens fire.
Bursts of automatic fire
blast out of the darkness, bouncing off iron and concrete. Hoodlum and ShyBoy are caught like rats,
pinned down and hit.
ShyBoy screams, grabbing
his bleeding forearm. Hoodlum grunts and curses as bullets rip through his legs
and shoulder. Both lie helpless,
awaiting death.
But lucky for them, death
has other fish to fry. The warehouse
erupts into a mass slaughter. The
Sellers by the Hummer have guns out instantly, spitting cones of flame as they
hose down the cars of the Buyers. The
Buyer Underling with the money case is hit and goes down.
The Buyers are also
throwing down with a vengeance. The
Main Seller takes a hit, then a flurry of impacts, and slumps over the
table. The Hummer is jumping and losing
parts under the fire from the Buyers' cars.
But the advantage is with
the Sellers, their concealed snipers pouring fire from above. The Buyers are trapped in a withering
crossfire.
Until Fletcher, also
wearing sniperscope goggles and carrying two assault rifles, makes his move.
Flitting like a phantom in the dark, he surgically eliminates snipers. He fires steadily, precisely. It's raining men.
Rosas is also in play,
dodging through the support beams firing at Fletcher. He eludes her in the darkness.
He also triggers a grenade
launcher attached to one of his weapons: an M-79 grenade streaks across the
warehouse and blows the Hummer apart.
Dazed gunmen stagger away from it but Fletcher scythes them down.
Rosas fires at the point
the grenade emerged from, but hits nothing.
She runs towards the point, shotgun pointing ahead from one hand, the
Glock in the other.
Hoodlum is bad off. ShyBoy, less seriously hurt, kneels beside
him, tugging at him. He stops when a
pistol touches the top of his head. A
WOUNDED SELLER stands over him.
WOUNDED
SELLER Who the fuck
are you, asshole? HOODLUM cranes his neck to
look up, past the terrified ShyBoy, at the gunman.
HOODLUM You talk to
the father of your children like that, pendejo? The Wounded Seller moves
his pistol to point at Hoodlum, his face contorted in rage.
His face contorts even more
as it slightly slows the passage of a twelve gauge steel slug. His head explodes and he is no longer much
of a threat.
ROSAS (O.S.) I told you
little idiots to wait in the van. ShyBoy falls over on his
back, staring at her. Hoodlum is
shaking with pain and fear. Rosas
squats beside them.
Rosas Stay here!
Keep quiet! You morons. She stands again, surveying
the charnel house around her.
Shyboy Shit, the
suitcase of money's gone. Rosas raps him on the head
with her Glock.
ROSAS I said shut
up, dammit. But he's right. The case is gone and she can hear footsteps
running through the dark warehouse. She
runs off in another direction.
As soon as she leaves,
Hoodlum starts inching his painful way towards the footlockers, leaving a smear
of blood.
ShyBoy stays where he was,
shaking his head. He hisses out a warning whisper.
SHYBOY No, carnal. We're out of here. Hoodlum continues crawling
to the trunks.
hoodlum You shittin'
me? Here's the stuff. Help me, we can
get it. ShyBoy sits, frozen. He looks towards the exit, then starts
toward Hoodlum. Then he takes a look at
Hoodlum's condition. He's not giving
any more orders.
Shyboy Fuck that, ese. Let me help you out of here. Vamanos. hoodlum Fuck you, you
piece of shit. Slowly, ShyBoy pulls away
from Hoodlum. He uses his good arm to
push to his feet, staggers away clutching his arm.
HOODLUM Vas a ver, chickenshit. You're on your own. Hoodlum continues, reaching
the closest footlocker. Triumphantly,
he pulls himself to his knees, grabs the carry strap, and tugs it towards
himself. It jumps forward, weightless,
and knocks him over. Empty.
INT. WAREHOUSE - NIGHT
Fletcher makes it to the
shed where his Camaro is stashed under a tarp.
He moves behind it, scans for pursuit, pointing his gun over the hood.
Seeing nobody near him, he
drags the tarp off, jumps in, and burns rubber for the main gate.
EXT. WAREHOUSE YARD - NIGHT
The Camaro squeals around a
corner, straight shot at the gate... which is completely blocked by Rosa's
Rental truck.
Frustrated, Fletcher looks
around, gets out and approaches the truck, case in one hand, assault rifle in
the other.
Halfway to the truck he
freezes, exposed, as a quick series of shots blow holes in his tires, windows
and engine compartment. The fusillade
goes on and on.
He stands still, sizing it
up. Rosas is in a concealed, protected
position, pointing the shotgun at him.
FLETCHER I see you
started believing in automatic firepower.
That a Glock? A louder report sounds and
a large hole appears in the front of the car. A blast of steam suggests a
pierced radiator.
FLETCHER Slugs,
huh? Not many people think of
that. You're my kind of shooter, honey. ROSAS Drop the gun
and the case. Hands behind your head. Shut up. INT. WAREHOUSE - NIGHT
Hoodlum manages to drag
himself to the final footlocker, which he hefts and cannot lift. Hoohah, the
mother load. He gives a savage grin and
pulls himself around to open it. There
is no padlock. Hoodlum laughs.
Hauling himself to his
knees, he unsnaps the catches. He
spreads his hands to the ends of the trunk, savoring victory. Dramatically, he throws open the lid.
EXT. WAREHOUSE YARD - NIGHT
Even out in
the yard, the explosion is pretty impressive.
Fletcher is startled, Rosas doesn't flinch an inch. ROSAS Dynamite
dope. FLETCHER Professional risks. ROSAS That
briefcase is a bomb, too. FLETCHER Get real,
gorgeous. How could you possibly know
that? ROSAS Same way I
knew you'd be here and came to take you in. FLETCHER "Take
you in"? Are you for real? ROSAS Drop the case
and move away from it. Drop the gun, raise your hands. ROSAS You telling
me you don't want to share, SweetCakes?
It's millions. ROSAS Drop it, put
your hands up. FLETCHER You
disappoint me, Sunshine. Where's your
sporting blood? You're just trying to avoid your attraction to me. ROSAS I'm trying to
avoid killing you. FLETCHER (Laughing) That is so
sweet. You do care. ROSAS It's part of
my recovery. FLETCHER What? CopAnon?
You're better than this. Stop hiding: call me out. ROSAS You're
already out. This isn't a game of
chicken and I'm not Wyatt Earp. I'm a
police officer. FLETCHER You gotta be
shitting me. You're making what, forty a year?
You know what you and I could make in the private sector? And have a lot of fun doing it, Baby. ROSAS Less than
forty, but it's enough. They pay me
real money, not a bag of explosives now and then. ROSAS It's not a
fucking bomb, Rosas. ROSAS Then you
won't mind if I pop a cap. She fires, he pulls the bag behind his body. FLETCHER Shit! What's wrong with you? ROSAS Where's your sporting blood? Fine. Drop your gun. Last time I tell you.
You're under arrest. He turns his back, the case hanging behind his legs, and slowly
walks away. FLETCHER Know what I
think, Rosas? I don't think you'll
shoot me in the back. ROSAS No, I'll
shoot you in the legs. Remember? He takes a few more steps.
FLETCHER Will
you? Because I'm faster than you,
remember? He busts an exceptional
move, whirling and throwing the case at her, along with a burst of automatic
fire. At the same time he jumps on the
car, trampolining up to grab a dangling piece of angle iron and swing out of
her line of fire.
Rosas shots hit the case, warping it open and blasting it
against the warehouse wall. Rosas heaves
a breath, checks her pistols, racks the riot gun, and heads into the warehouse,
crouched like a hunter. INT. WAREHOUSE - NIGHT
Rosas cautiously stalks
through the warehouse, her shotgun pointing ahead of her like the sniffing
muzzle of a hound.
She and Fletcher play a
silent cat/mouse game, in shots that use the features of the location to
advantage. They are pros: this is not
the typical chase scene where idiots bang away at nothing. It's all suspense as both shooters angle for
the kill shot.
Rosas sees a hint of
movement and covers it, but there is no shot.
Dispassionately, she moves on.
Fletcher tosses a bit of
debris across the building, whanging into sheet metal. But it draws no fire. He nods happily to himself, glides deeper
into the building.
Rosas comes to a ladder,
examines it thoughtfully, shakes her head and moves on.
Fletcher comes to a place
that suits him, looks around carefully.
There is a large slice of bare floor in front of him, the sidewalls
visible. A blind alley.
He moves through a small
doorway and turns to face the open space from the darker interior.
FLETcHER Hey, Rosas! In the shadows, Rosas
turns, points at his voice.
FLETCHER This is a
perfect place to discuss a better future, sweetheart. Extremely cautious, Rosas
inches towards him.
FLETCHER You're all
I'd ever want in a woman. And I don't think you've found any serious male
matchups. We're a perfect couple. Rosas stands at one end of
the open area, scans it.
FLETCHER In a perfect
world, we'd be mates. Running together,
doing whatever we like, taking whatever we want. Making love like wild carnivores. Rosas eases into the
exposed space, back to the wall.
FLETCHER We should really
talk about a partnership. Take a test
drive. Rosas is committed to the
open area now, moving forward protected only by whatever cover she can generate
by shooting.
FLETCHER Think about
it, OK? Get back to me. He thrusts an assault rifle
through the doorway. He has the drop on
Rosas, but is protected behind the doorjamb.
Rosas freezes, the shotgun
pointing at the corner that shelters Fletcher's body.
FLETCHER Who knows,
maybe that perfect world's right around the corner? The Mexican standoff
continues for a long moment, Rosas fixed on her shot, the rifle unwavering.
FLETCHER I could cut
you in half right now, honey. But that's the last thing I want. Drop the shotgun. Now. Rosas sizes it up, drops
the gun. Carefully, she reaches to her
lapels and sheds the duster. She stands
exposed and ready, pistols holstered.
Fletcher eases out of the
doorway, covering her.
FLETCHER I'm surprised
you'd get caught in the open like that.
Unless you're interested in the same thing I am. ROSAS You're under
arrest. Drop the gun. FLETCHER Okay. He lowers the assault
rifle, lets it fall to the floor.
He faces her in classic
showdown pose, pistols in sight.
FLETCHER We can still
kiss and make up. ROSAS I'm not
really into makeup. FLETCHER Well, then
podnuh... EXT. WAREHOUSE YARD - NIGHT
ShyBoy bursts out of the warehouse door, eyes on the gate and
escape from horror. But as he stumbles
towards the gate he sees a gleam by the wall.
Slowing, he spots the damaged metal case. He screeches to a halt. Shivering with fear, he approaches the case. He sees money sticking out. He looks around, dives on the case, opens
it. The sight of millions of bucks stops him, a holy
experience. His face slack and gentle
as a lover's, he reaches to touch the money.
Then grabs handfuls, stuffing it in his pockets. He realizes
he can't stash it all. He looks around,
then grabs the case up, holding it to his chest with both arms, and runs to the
gate, where he skins under the rental truck.
He is on his
back beneath the truck when he hears a single shot from inside the warehouse. SHYBOY Oh,
shit. He scrambles out from under
the truck, hears pounding and yelling from the truck body. He looks one direction and sees two
pissed-off guys cuffed in a car, yelling at him. He runs the other way.
FADE
OUT:
FADE IN: EXT. CRIME SCENE - NIGHT
Two squad cars are at the
scene already, light bars strobing.
Sirens indicate more are on the way.
DISPATCHER
(O.S.) (Urgent,
crackly) ...report
shots fired. Officer down... The arrival of an aid car
drowns out the car radio.
Amid the confusion and
light show, another car pulls up to the scene.
A Cop steps to the window, leans down to speak.
SCENE COP Yeah,
Kocherhans is busted up. He fell down an airshaft and popped a few caps to get
some attention. INT. SQUAD CAR - NIGHT
Cole laughs, in relief and
scorn.
COLE He always was
a dork. SCENE COP Really. Well, it's handled. Go ahead and clear. Drop by anytime. As Cole pulls the car away
from the scene, he turns to Rosas, sitting in uniform, shaking her head in
amusement.
ROSAS He likes
attention: now he's got all he can handle. COLE Gee, sorry,
Nova. You've been back a week and we
still haven't found you any perps to waste. ROSAS Listen... COLE For awhile I
thought you were going to have to plug Alicia, when she found out you were back
in my car. But she dealt with it. ROSAS Alicia's all
right. Does she really worry about me jumping your bones? COLE No, she
worries about you getting my ass shot off. ROSAS Tell her not
to worry. My roomie's a really good doctor. A heavy pause.
ROSAS Are you
worried about me getting you killed? COLE I think it's
more like you're on a suicide mission. Another long pause.
ROSAS Actually, I'm
getting a handle on that. Sort of. COLE Glad to hear
it. Rosas I'm getting
some help. COLE Cool. Can't
wait to tell all the guys. ROSAS Okay, maybe I
could waste just one more, then quit. COLE Good
idea. Taper off. ROSAS Believe it or
not, I learned something from that Fletcher asshole. COLE Not to tackle
a machine gun with a sixgun? Me, too. ROSAS That I don't
want to be like him. Cole shoots her a glance,
looks back to his driving.
COLE Figured that
out, did you? ROSAS Listen, Cam,
when I was on leave I broke the law.
Seriously. A lot. COLE Wow. Of all people. Was it fun? EXT. STREET SCENE - NIGHT
Seen from above, their
patrol car moves slowly down an arterial, approaching a congested area.
ROSAS (V.O.) Not what
you'd call fun. I'm not going to do it
again. But... The reason I told you...
I don't know... It's just that... COLE (V.O.) Things aren't
as black and white as you thought? rosas (V.O.) It looks like
nothing is. COLE (V.O.) Welcome to
the human race. (Beat) I still feel
the same about department regs, though. ROSAS (V.O.) Yeah, me too. COLE (V.O.) I probably
shouldn't ask, but I think I got a right.
You also getting some of your more personal shit a little more squared
away? ROSAS (V.O.) Yeah. For now. (Beat) But we're not
gonna talk about it. COLE (V.O.) Good. The car dwindles, gets lost
in the lights of the traffic.
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